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amended 23 10 2014 omitting 'to' from 3rd line 1st stanza, and 'you' from 1st line last stanza. 

I've Limricized..' Haiku Than Bauk, a time or two. In verse intent, play scenes. To prose.' not heavy of line.! My word..! 'to grasp the time' Its to do.! Today so seems.. In green of mango groves, Where marmosets flex toes Crush berry.. Daub bamboo screen, To paint a vivid show my wish for you to know.' In Balassi stanza keen.

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Date: 12/21/2013 8:52:00 AM
thanks for the soupmail, and don't be a stranger when you return after holidays!!
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Date: 12/18/2013 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations Joe. Unique write!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:51:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 12/17/2013 7:55:00 AM
big congrats on a well deserved win, Joe!!
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations Joe xx
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:14:00 AM
This is fun, congrats!
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:54:00 PM
hmmmm ;) Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:42:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Joe
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Date: 12/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
Hey, WAY to balassi!!!! Sounds like a dance groove, doesn't it? It's cool that you gave this one a try. A cute poem.
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Date: 11/23/2013 9:16:00 PM
Good morning my dear friend Joe. I'm so glad to drop by to visit you and your poetry this morning & it's my great honor to read again ( esp. the first to comment) another very lovely and splendid write of yours. I love so much how you creatively played, describe & paint a wonderful image on your poem mentioning some wonderful poetry forms then the cute picture below. So so love it. TYSM for sharing & for the smiles from this stellar write. Have a grace-filled wkend! love lots & big hugsLeo
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