Me Or Not Me

Is this me that I’m looking at through this wrinkled mirror Me? Or is this me that’s staring at Me … not me? Me … or not me? I saw this me … that reads Me glisten as a dew on a rose bud, but now this me grins … glares at Me, through wrinkled cheeks … sunken eyes. Is this me, …. Me? Me …. or not me? Or is this an issue with my eyes That they don’t see Me as I see Me? They saw Me so young as a plum when cocks gently caressed them. Why, now they don’t see Me as I see Me? Aren’t they my eyes? Are they? … or … they are not? No more, No less; ... Is this Me Not true? True ….. or not true?
Nov. 30, 2020 It is what it is……….or is it??? Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 12/2/2020 5:21:00 PM
We are who we are no matter how we see ourselves...love this, Newton. Best wishes and nice take for the contest. Stay well my friend. ~Charlie
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/2/2020 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles, for your visit and this great comment!!
Date: 11/30/2020 12:26:00 PM
There are so many reflections of the me's that we see, and then there are a million more of the me's that they see, nicely penned dear poet friend, gl in the contest, thank you for sharing your talent .
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Date: 11/30/2020 12:31:00 PM
Thank you very, very much, Pixie, for this impressively sweet comment and the complement!!
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