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Me In Three Was A Dream

Me in three was a dream,
when I started out young and free.
He went down on one knee,
a box with a ring oh no with a key.
The key to his heart was his plea, 
would I stay or flee?
We had some hot tea,
watching out over the blue sea.
We would wed under the pretty big pink tree,
now with baby we are three.

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Gershon Wolf

November 30, 2025 at 7:55 PM

Adorable, Paula. Wrap this poem in a bootie and cuddle it in the cradle. ~ gw

CayCay Godwin

November 30, 2025 at 5:51 PM

Oh, another that has me asking fact or fiction? Such a pretty feel and vision your poem created for all of us to enjoy, and I do/did enjoy it very much.

Paige Hind

November 24, 2025 at 6:21 PM

Aw, sweet dreams!! Enjoyed

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:16 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "Me In Three Was A Dream" write. It was fun to write. Not True, Just A Story.... Have a fun day writing away...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 24, 2025 at 9:13 AM

Dear Paula, I enjoyed the playful rhythm in your poem and the way love is framed as both whimsical and sincere. The imagery of keys, seas, and trees gave it a lighthearted charm, while the closing turn toward family grounded it in tenderness. Beautiful! Autumn Blessings, Dear Paula, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:15 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "Me In Three Was A Dream" write. I was just having some fun writing this romantic/fun Rhyme write. Not True, Just A Story.... Have a fun day writing away.................

Heidi Sands

November 24, 2025 at 4:13 AM

I enjoyed this creative , fun poem. Well done :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:11 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "Me In Three Was A Dream" write. It is a romantic/fun write but Not True. Have a fun day writing away.................

Victor Buhagiar

November 24, 2025 at 2:40 AM

There is humour and seriousness in this poem. Great imagery.

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:09 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to have Great imagery. This romantic/fun write is Not True. Glad you enjoyed it. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away...........

Valsa George

November 23, 2025 at 7:16 PM

Very sweet memories and looking back to the day when he proposed to you. Romantic and pleasantly imaginative. All the best.

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:03 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also Thanks for your, All the best. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, Romantic and pleasantly imaginative. This is just a write. Not True... It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2025 at 4:01 PM

What a sweet idea for this prompt

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 9:01 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, a sweet idea for this prompt. I enjoyed writing this one. It is Not true. Have a fun day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

November 23, 2025 at 2:54 PM

Creative work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2025 at 8:58 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, Creative work. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun day writing away...........

Karen Jones

November 23, 2025 at 9:16 AM

Delightful! I love your own it tells a great life story! Bet you do well in the contest! Good luck dear Paula!

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 9:36 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also Thanks for your, Good luck. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, Delightful. It was a ton of fun to bring this story to life. Not True... Have a fun day/week writing away...........

Len Gasun

November 23, 2025 at 3:28 AM

Oh this is so delightful rhyme my dear poet friend, Paula. I think the key is better than a ring-- a key of his heart and I think also a key for a grandiose new home for the three of you with a pretty big pink tree in the backyard. I love this and really enjoyed a lot. A great winning entry if this is for the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry if I can't stay long yet at PS coz of eye prob & time constraint. I'll be back soon ok. God bless and best wishes always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 9:34 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also Thanks for your, best wishes always. Glad you Love "Me In Three Was A Dream" write. It was a ton of fun to bring this story to life. Not True... Hope your eye is getting better. Hugs.... Have a fun day/week writing away...........

sara Etgen-Baker

November 22, 2025 at 5:37 PM

oh, this is such a fun poem....love the beginning and your rhymes. Nicely done.

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 9:29 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, Nicely done. It was a ton of fun to bring this story to life. Not True... Have a fun day/week writing away...........

Abdullah Alhemaidy

November 22, 2025 at 2:49 PM

Interesting and sweet write!

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 9:27 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found "Me In Three Was A Dream" write to be, Interesting and sweet write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day/week writing away...........

John Loving Iii

November 22, 2025 at 1:28 PM

Keeping up with tradition seems to require much but it is all well worth it.

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 9:25 AM

Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "Me In Three Was A Dream" write. It was fun to write. Have a fun day/week writing away...........

Paula Goldsmith

November 22, 2025 at 12:51 PM

Me In Three Was A Dream ~ Date Written: 11/22/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...... "Just A Write. Not True......"

Me In Three Was A Dream

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