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For As The Third Person Bio Poetry Contest of Julianne Williams 

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Me as Mom: As Imagined from My Daughter's Perspective

My mom has ailments making it hard for her to clean.
She’s never been a great housekeeper anyway.
She’s got two cats and a dog, but two of my kids
have allergies, so at Mom’s house it’s hard for us to stay!

She’s always been obsessed with food and counting calories.
I’ve listened to her all my life; she loves to talk about
her diets and what’s good to eat (what a know-it-all).
But as with anything she likes, she always goes all out!

She used to love to decorate for holidays.
All her Christmas clutter– for Heaven’s sake!
Each Halloween, animated toys she would buy.
Like a child, she loves the creepy sounds they make.

She loves to have a lot of fun. When we were young,
she’d take us to the drive-in, or videos we’d rent.
She’d drag us into thrift shops (and still she’s pretty cheap).
Just so she could get laps in, to pools we often went.

Both Virgos, we’re sensible and love to read and write.
We think alike. Though we're outspoken, she’s the calmer one.
She’s still teaching part-time, so I don’t see her much,
but if her help I need, I know she’ll get it done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 6:12 PM
awesome third person bio, my friend, just loved it.
Empress Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Dear sweet andrea, i finally get to comment on this one, and made me think, i wonder what my son would say about me haha! So beautiful your relationship with her and also youve described your self through the eyes of your daught in a very creative manner! The best iv read for this contest so far! Nailed it! Best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Thanks , Ink. This was fun to do
Tor Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 11:02 AM
What a great mom Andrea so glad you had such a mom you could count on for help. Liked the part about the children's allergies and her cats and dogs. It's like that in our home lol, following in your mom's footsteps. Best wishes for the Contest... Hugs...
Tor Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Got it still love the way you wrote it...
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 10:49 PM
Please reread this, my friend. I am the mom as seen thru my daughter's eyes. Maybe I need to work on my title some more!
Hind Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 6:28 PM
I liked this one. You have a sense of humor, you and Kim! That's great that you teach- must be fulfilling. This poem made me smile; love how you could laugh at yourself! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Thanks, Paige
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Went back to the title, glad I did…lol! Great write!
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Good thing you reread the title. Or it would be very strange. I could not think of a better way to title it
Narain Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 11:18 AM
A humorous biography of Mom. Mom is always the best.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 12:37 PM
thanks, jay
Read Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Lovely poem Andrea, your honesty shone through, you certainly wore your heart on your sleeve writing this one. Xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 12:36 PM
thanks, John. Sometimes I am too honest for my own good.
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 2:43 AM
- These are words from the heart ... but I have to smile a little :) - Mom is the best ! - Good luck in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 6:49 AM
She doesn't think I am the best mom, but she is my only daughter and the best!
George Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 8:57 PM
This made me chuckle to myself. I think these are truths couched in a sense of humor. "She’d drag us into thrift shops (and still she’s pretty cheap)". This line made me laugh.
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 10:50 PM
I am glad if you laughed. My kids hated the thrift shops!!
Rolland Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 5:08 PM
this is touching andrea, always a special relation with your daughter, l loved the way you shared this delicate poem best wishes to you both
Bauer Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:25 PM
This is great, Andrea! I hope you shared it with your daughter!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 3:08 PM
I haven't yet! Maybe she would revise it !
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