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WHEN I WAS A KID, I DID THE USUAL BALLET AND TAP THEN, I JUST DIDN'T ANYMORE BECAUSE I WAS A TEENAGER SEE . . . WHEN, I WAS IN MY TWENTIES MY BFF AND I SAW AN ANNOUCEMENT AT THE UNIVERSITY LOOKING FOR DANCERS TO JOIN A GROUP AND WE SAID TO EACH OTHER WHY NOT, HECK YES, LETS DO IT! SO WE WENT TO THE MEET AND GREET, OH MY, IT WAS INTIMIDATING, THESE GIRLS WERE BEAUTIFUL AND DANCED LIKE BUTTERFLIES. I WAS NOT SO SURE ANYMORE BUT, MY FRIEND WAS CONFIDENT WE WOULD BE ACCEPTED. THEY DEMONSTRATED A SIMPLE ROUTINE FOR US TO USE . . . AND MY TURN CAME TO AUDITION. OH, WHY WERE MY FEET STUCK? WHY HAD ALL THOUGHTS LEFT MY HEAD? I KNOW I GOT MOST OF THE MOVES WRONG, BUT I PUT MY EVERYTHING INTO IT I SWUNG MY LONG RAVEN HAIR, SWIRLED MY HIPS AND FLASHED MY LEGS AND CRASHED INTO A WALL . . . NO ONE SPOKE THE ROOM WAS SILENT. THANK YOU THEY SAID. THEN, MY BBF HAD HER TURN, OKAY, I WAS BAD BUT SHE WAS AWFUL, SHE LOOKED DERANGED, I DON'T THINK SHE GOT ONE MOVE RIGHT AND EVEN I HAD TO HOLD BACK LAUGHING, LIKE WAS SHE DOING THAT ON PURPOSE OR WHAT? ANYWAYS, WE DIDN'T MAKE THE GROUP THAT DAY . . . WE LEFT THERE FEELING LIKE TWO IDIOTS, FULL OF DISGRACE AND WENT FOR A DRINK OR TWO, OR THREE . . . OKAY WE GOT DRUNK AND HAD A GOOD LAUGH AT OURSELVES. TO THIS DAY WHEN WE GET TOGETHER WE RECALL THAT AUDITION AND LAUGH AT HOW WE LET OUR HAIR DOWN THAT DAY . . . SO THAT OUTRAGEOUS ATTEMPT, THOUGH SILLY AND STUPID IS A FUN AND WONDERFUL MEMORY WE NOW SHARE. __________________ January 24, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/ME AND MY FRIEND Copyright Protected, ID 17-8686-19-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Letting Your Hair Down sponsor, Frank Herrera Third Place

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Date: 1/25/2017 11:00:00 AM
Hi BW: the bet thing about growing older is that you can laugh at your mishaps anon longer feel intimidated Great Write, BW!
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Date: 1/25/2017 12:03:00 AM
I dance like a lamb chop! So you can't be that bad! Good luck ./|\
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