Me & Prison

How can I ever forget the years I've wasted, tears I've tasted
     for a crime I did not commit.
These eight years will always be difficult to forget.

I carried around a lot of hate and felt condemned.
     A lot of weight on my shoulders for someone elses sins.
Prison is a sad and ugly place to be in.
     These bricks have nearly smothered me.
I've seen just about everything.
     In here that's my reality,
from rape, gangs and fighting.

Prison is a whole other world behind these walls
     I refuse to be trapped in it's iron jaws.
Only the strong survive.
     You're dead even though you're alive.
Prison is angry bee's in a Bee-Hive.
     The weak get taken advantage of and die inside.
Mentally broken and some I've seen commit suicide.

A lot of heartache I had to endure.
     My pain was obscure.
It happened so fast when my momma passed.
     I was left alone, no one to rely on.
So with my only family gone,  I had to remain strong.
     I had my daughters to come home to,
And that was something to value.
     So I'll endure this loneliness to the bitter end.
Hearts don't break they just bend.
     I learned to pick up this pen.
Jot my thoughts down.
     I'm determined to wear the Poet's Crown.
I've digested a lot of criticism along the way.
     I don't follow the same worn cliche.
I'm a new breed of D.N.A.!
     

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Maybe I can hear from you personally to say "Hi"  Until the next piece take care Poetry 
Soup!   Jimmy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/26/2011 8:51:00 PM
WOW Jimmy... powerful and moving. WOW. Makes me want to visit someone in prison... just to share some words and a smile. Even little things must mean a lot in such a place.
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:12:00 AM
wow :(
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:09:00 AM
felt u here
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Date: 3/22/2010 4:16:00 PM
Super Poem, I see your very talented- do you have computer access? How much longer till you get out of there?
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:48:00 AM
Hi Jimmy, thanks for introducing me to your poetry. Keep up the wonderful thoughts that you put to paper, and I am certain one day it will all pay off. God Bless, Lisa
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:41:00 AM
Jimmy, Like I said before, you have a gift, so keep writing and to challenge yourself read up and practice different kinds of poetry in your spare time. Sorry about the injustice. I don't mean to make light of your situation- They can put behind bars but it's just your body. They can't touch your soul unless you let them. Your spirit is yours and your soul is God's That's why we' re never completely satisfied apart from him. If you haven't yet, read about the one true God who loves you.
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Date: 10/6/2009 3:59:00 AM
Thank you Jimmy for once again sharing your heart with us. This is an awesomw piece. Please continue writing and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 6:01:00 PM
Jimmy, Prison isn't a nice place for anyone. I'm sorry that you are there for something you didn't do. The more you write down the "lighter" you will get. The best of luck...Karla
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:28:00 PM
Hi Jimmy, I commented on your poetry ealier today. Keep love close to your heart, everything will work out okay if you do. For there isn't anything you can't do with it. This is a good read, I really enjoyed the heartfelt emotion and metophors in this timeless piece. Keep writing and we'll keep reading, writing. Take care. Love Light Truth Patty Wow! When I think of all the good you could do when you get out just by example, you'll influence impressionable hearts for sure, smile.
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Date: 10/5/2009 1:23:00 PM
Hi Jimmy,,keep writing,your writes our pleasure,regarding the critics,,dnt worry God loves you as you are like Godloves me as i am,just keep believing in a better future--Love Charma
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Date: 10/5/2009 12:09:00 PM
Heartfelt emotion coming from a tangled heart. Harsh story, Good metophors and emotion, good freeverse, keep the attention of the reader. God bless, may you endure. Judy Riley
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Date: 10/5/2009 12:06:00 PM
I hope that you soon will have a release day. You have captured here what we most probably have a picture of in our poet's head of what prison is like. Keep writing. Sara
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