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It's like I'm trapped in this shell called a body I can't get out Every1 else all seems the same to me its like all their minds are intertwined into one I wanna leave this body behind I don't understand people anymore It's like they all changed And my thoughts are trapped in my mind I won't let them out I am a lonely soul I need someone to talk to I'm lost and need to find my way for what I'm searching for If only i knew what that was I'm on a lonely road to my death What happens after that i don't know I hope i find what I'm searching for before the ultimate end It's nothing on this world this i know It's not a god, or a girl, or to be accepted, or even love I have tried all of those I think it's somebody who understands these thoughts i have I don't know if that's even it Am i Crazy or Am i just an average guy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 5:28:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Randal. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:49:00 AM
Before death is what is important ... there is faith for wings to fly across the sea of death, there is hope for courage to love the invisible giver of faith, there is poetry like you write to bring us all to our sense that life is a precious time ... and there is you a great poet, and writer, inspiring praise.
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:10:00 AM
Great writes...we are here this community really understands. Keep writing it really helps and send us some more. Awesome
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