Me!.!. (Redone)

when i met you you took
my heart and
then you tore it out
thinking you would
not hurt me but you did
you said you love me
i beg to differ 
i gave you my heart
my soul my love
that time mistaken 
for giving you a 
heart worth breaking 
but i did i cant go back
and change it it is done
i have to move on with
my life and forget about you
and all the ways you hurt me
i need to fix my heart and forget
about it im tired of being used
i thought i found the right girl
but i didnt i ended up being used
like always i hate to say this 
but it is true im tired of it 
you treat me like im nothing
when im better than you 
i would have died for you
i would have fought for you
i would have lied to a cop for you
i would even cry for you which on
the end i did cry for you all night
i loved you so much it wasnt funny
then have you break my heart
i wont let it happen again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/21/2009 7:32:00 PM
nicely put.
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:46:00 AM
awesome
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