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Me-The Confined Bird

A bird sings.. mawkish Sings and dances smooth She... by doing so has naturally forgotten her world. Soars high upwards aims to touch moon but sadly can't.. falls back in nest the bird is unable to achieve her dreams.. being "leashed". 15-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest. Note1:*Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest* Sponsor:Emile Pinet Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest. Note 2:STRAND no 770 any theme any form' Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 5:36:00 PM

This is sadly beautiful Deepa...the innocent desires of a bird that wishes to fly free but cannot and is compelled to sing melodies amid her pain. Lovely portrayal! Congratulations on your win :)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/24/2020 2:53:00 AM

Thankyou very much for your kind words and continuous reviews and support.:-)Yes it's really sad to envision birds or any human being confined.I am happy that you understood the portrayal:-) Take care.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2020 1:18:00 PM

Hello V.Deepa, I do not like it when I see a bird in a cage. I prefer to see them fly freer. They belong in the trees. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2020 12:38:00 PM

Hello V. Oh- thank you for explaining it to me.I see your point of view. Have a nice day my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/17/2020 2:20:00 AM

Hi Ma'am. Yes even I don't like birds nor any human being confined.Each one has to enjoy his/her freedom. This poem is in point of few girls who are undergoing lot of restrictions in their home or society.The bird is personified to a girl here. Have a great day.:-)