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Me-The Confined Bird

A bird sings.. mawkish
Sings and dances smooth
She... by doing so 
has naturally
forgotten her world.

Soars high upwards
aims to touch moon
but sadly can't..
falls back in nest

the bird is
unable 
to achieve

her dreams..
being

"leashed".

15-5-2020

~DEEPA~

Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest.
Note1:*Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest*
Sponsor:Emile Pinet

Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest.
Note 2:STRAND no 770 any theme any form' 
Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Aditi Mishra Date: 5/23/2020 5:36:00 PM This is sadly beautiful Deepa...the innocent desires of a bird that wishes to fly free but cannot and is compelled to sing melodies amid her pain. Lovely portrayal! Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 5/24/2020 2:53:00 AM Thankyou very much for your kind words and continuous reviews and support.:-)Yes it's really sad to envision birds or any human being confined.I am happy that you understood the portrayal:-) Take care.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/16/2020 1:18:00 PM Hello V.Deepa, I do not like it when I see a bird in a cage. I prefer to see them fly freer. They belong in the trees. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/17/2020 12:38:00 PM Hello V. Oh- thank you for explaining it to me.I see your point of view. Have a nice day my friend. V. Deepa Date: 5/17/2020 2:20:00 AM Hi Ma'am. Yes even I don't like birds nor any human being confined.Each one has to enjoy his/her freedom. This poem is in point of few girls who are undergoing lot of restrictions in their home or society.The bird is personified to a girl here. Have a great day.:-)