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Rainbow Sky By Mahtab Bangalee Rainbow on the cloud Wandering to south Dyeing high Charming sky © Mahtab Bangalee Chattogram 12/03/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/16/2023 8:29:00 PM

Dyeing high…cool descript, Mahtab!

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/19/2023 3:08:00 AM

Thanks dear poet

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/13/2023 7:56:00 AM

I see the rainbow clearly, Mahtab. Pay no attention to narrow minded people. Keep penning:)

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/13/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Poet for your kind encouragement

David Wakeling

Date: 3/13/2023 12:09:00 AM

This has no meaning for me because words are missing

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/13/2023 10:54:00 PM

Well, Dear Reader, I humbly appreciated your comment and understood that this has no meaning for you but this has meaning for me because the game of poetic words has various flowing which makes a poet introvert to an extrovert through the expression. Though I'm not a poet, but as a human, I have an inner strength to express myself and the above writing is its feedback.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2023 6:13:00 PM

PS is a site for encouragement and support. It is also a place to learn and sharpen one's talent. If you don't have anything supportive or encouraging to say, then don't say anything. This young man has not been writing very long, if you have some useful information that will help him understand what you don't understand. Email him and help him out. He is a human being. He has feelings.

David Wakeling
Date: 3/13/2023 4:26:00 PM

THIS HAS NO MEANING FOR ME BECAUSE WORDS ARE MISSING

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2023 7:54:00 AM

perhaps if you were to soup mail this young man and offer assistance he would understand. Criticism without guidance is worthless. Obviously English is not his first language. You should be a little more understanding and kind. Another thing, poems are open to interpretation. If you don't understand maybe it is you who needs help.