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Maze

Clouds embrace, a pendant against its timeless Climax, on a warm humid summer evening. Shadows in the ardent garden, twinkling lights Through sinuous motion paths, a maze we know And taken for granted without trees near. Through we run; fireflies softly shimmer in flight. Brother and I, and one jar among us. We watch as they flitter, flutter, and flicker, Turning, twisting to stop without knowing. Ever so slowly and quietly, gently with cupped Hands, catch the moving twinkling light. Here, I open wide my hands, into the jar it flew. Peering long we stood staring in silence On unbroken, trapped living light flickering Gleam in the dark; then stillness gave way Not a minute wasted. We were lost between the evergreen shrub Puzzle walls. The lovely maze, dark and deep Seems like miles. Suddenly there came a wall At a distance the exit path out of the maze. 6/24/2020 Maze - 10 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: A Dear Heart
1. garden 2. maze 3. paths 4. sinuous 5. turning 6. trapped 7. puzzle 8. twisting 9. lost 10. wall
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Watt Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Oh, this is magical Eve... I loved it! Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ John
La France Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem, a FAV for me, and I love the image too _Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 2:31 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous Eve! Love the beautiful journey through the maze and your magical experience. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Somadas Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:44 AM
Back with congratulations Eve.. Great win..
Boddie Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 9:44 PM
which way do i go....should i proceed fast or slow....or will i forever remain lost....how much does the exit cost....get me out of here....why are there so many obstacles that appear....but its too late to stop now....i will get out some way or somehow....very inspiring write mrs roper....;)
Dutta Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 1:35 AM
WOW. Words are woven in nicest way. Congrats n Love.
Proxenos Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 9:33 AM
You used the words meant to be used to create a wonderful timeless piece of poetry - wonderful to b ring back memories of childhood escapades Lovely write - love the pic with 2 children you and your brother and the fireflies! Awesome Eve, Hugs Jenny.
May Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Wonderful write on fireflies a maze Eve...
Buehler Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 10:48 PM
This beautiful poem allows one to enter into the magic of a children's summer night, and also brings on memories of childhood. Best of wishes for the contest.
Tor Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Eve incredible imagery. Love this one my Dear. I think it's goiing to do exceptional in the contest. Hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 6:50 AM
Exceptional writing, dear friend. I love it. I'm sure it's a winner. God bless you with many more wonderful poems. Love sent your way, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 4:39 AM
You used the ten words well Eve. Have only seen one in Turkey. Yes, just one, I was faciniated. Hope you are well Good luck Tom
Somadas Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 1:38 AM
Lovely verse Eve.. fireflies softly shimmer in flight.. Beautifully penned.. Great entry.. Good luck..
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