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May's Daffodils

Along verdant hills , May crowns daffodils, Where floral glow thrills as evening moon fills The scent of air’s chills while robin blue shrills A music that instills waves from grass on mills. Petals dressed in frills reel like yellow quills And laced mist distills…flaunting nature’s skills! .............. John Hamilton's Contest Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 4/30/2017

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Date: 5/4/2017 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations on this superb monorhyme winning first place Nette! 7 : )
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Date: 5/3/2017 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful! A 7 from me. Congratulations! - Dean
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:28:00 PM
Lovely monorhyme. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2017 8:59:00 AM
Lovely imagery with the use of excellent monorhymes, Nette. Congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/1/2017 2:06:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS, NETTE ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2017 11:08:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:52:00 AM
Its beautiful Nette,congrats!
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Date: 4/30/2017 6:24:00 PM
Congrats on your first place poem
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Date: 4/30/2017 5:17:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2017 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:04:00 PM
Great write, and excellent rhymes, Nette you always seem to top my contests, great work!
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Date: 4/30/2017 7:58:00 AM
You have epitomized Spring again. Great Write, nette!
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Date: 4/30/2017 1:19:00 AM
Hi Nette, I miss reading your poem... Regards, Cheryl
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Date: 4/29/2017 3:20:00 PM
I am awed.Majestic word-scenes from your poetic garden!
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Date: 4/29/2017 1:52:00 PM
Being a gardener, I am mesmerized by this unique in beauty poem dear, nette! A 7! Good luck and many hugs!
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Date: 4/29/2017 1:42:00 PM
- This only needs one word from me, Nette .... ; BEAUTIFUL - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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