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Maybe We'Re Not

Lackluster lives filled with emptiness Around us everywhere But … seldom do we notice They are even there For we have lives of import – Things of urgency Making our time busy - It’s our dependency. We do not see the child who Needs our time alone To comfort, guide and teach them So their thoughts remain: unsewn. Then there are the aged Abandoned in their cocoons Of experience and history But … ‘tis we who are marooned. We ARE our brother’s keeper But … if we are self-obsessed, How then can we consider: ‘Tis we, the ones are blessed?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 10:20:00 PM
So very true. Should we travel from first cry to our moment to die and not gifted true love to others we have failed. Sharing is the pathway to giving love. We are blessed that love the most and give that way to others. Great write my friend. A super 7 in my book..
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:34:00 AM
Very well written, Jack, with a great message. The only way to truly know ourselves is to serve others. Wonderful poem, my friend.... Robert.
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