Maybe Tomorrow

The Sun had left the horizon
Far behind when I awoke
To face another pointless day
Being destitute and broke

Got up off my friends sofa
Went and made a cup of tea
Had a look through an old paper
Just to find a place for me

Saw a few that might be ok
But I could never pay the rent
Without job and accommodation
I’ll end up living in a tent

Maybe I could have tried harder
In the classroom years ago
I did not think I’d end up here
How the hell was I to know

I even served my country
But that does not mean a thing
Only when I need some shelter
I can some old mates ring

I don’t want to be a burden
And it fills me up with shame
That I have to seek their help
When they are not to blame

I keep looking on the bright side
At least I still have legs to walk
Unlike some other poor soldiers
Who are too shell shocked to talk

Maybe tomorrow I can beat the Sun
And wait patiently to see her rise
To fill my life with her warm embrace
And her ever changing endless skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:04 PM
great title with an optimistic message. if this is based on truth, i'm sorry you're going through a tough time but it sounds like you have the right attitude to help you get through to better times. i'm glad that peter guided me to your poems!
Lyle Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poem glad you enjoyed it. part fact ,part fiction, part personal part observation. Kind regards Andy Lyle
Torres Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 1:08 PM
a very delightful poem indeed..full hope and strength..i love your poem, Robert!!! ^__^
Lyle Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. It is nice to get some positive fed back on ones work. I was wondering if I would get any comments. My poem Storm has 150 views and a few comments which I find strange. Thank you once again Andy Lyle
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