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Maybe Tomorrow

The Sun had left the horizon Far behind when I awoke To face another pointless day Being destitute and broke Got up off my friends sofa Went and made a cup of tea Had a look through an old paper Just to find a place for me Saw a few that might be ok But I could never pay the rent Without job and accommodation I’ll end up living in a tent Maybe I could have tried harder In the classroom years ago I did not think I’d end up here How the hell was I to know I even served my country But that does not mean a thing Only when I need some shelter I can some old mates ring I don’t want to be a burden And it fills me up with shame That I have to seek their help When they are not to blame I keep looking on the bright side At least I still have legs to walk Unlike some other poor soldiers Who are too shell shocked to talk Maybe tomorrow I can beat the Sun And wait patiently to see her rise To fill my life with her warm embrace And her ever changing endless skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/13/2014 4:04:00 PM
great title with an optimistic message. if this is based on truth, i'm sorry you're going through a tough time but it sounds like you have the right attitude to help you get through to better times. i'm glad that peter guided me to your poems!
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poem glad you enjoyed it. part fact ,part fiction, part personal part observation. Kind regards Andy Lyle
Date: 1/23/2014 1:08:00 PM
a very delightful poem indeed..full hope and strength..i love your poem, Robert!!! ^__^
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 1/23/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. It is nice to get some positive fed back on ones work. I was wondering if I would get any comments. My poem Storm has 150 views and a few comments which I find strange. Thank you once again Andy Lyle

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