Maybe Tomorrow

The Sun had left the horizon
Far behind when I awoke
To face another pointless day
Being destitute and broke

Got up off my friends sofa
Went and made a cup of tea
Had a look through an old paper
Just to find a place for me

Saw a few that might be ok
But I could never pay the rent
Without job and accommodation
I’ll end up living in a tent

Maybe I could have tried harder
In the classroom years ago
I did not think I’d end up here
How the hell was I to know

I even served my country
But that does not mean a thing
Only when I need some shelter
I can some old mates ring

I don’t want to be a burden
And it fills me up with shame
That I have to seek their help
When they are not to blame

I keep looking on the bright side
At least I still have legs to walk
Unlike some other poor soldiers
Who are too shell shocked to talk

Maybe tomorrow I can beat the Sun
And wait patiently to see her rise
To fill my life with her warm embrace
And her ever changing endless skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/13/2014 4:04:00 PM
great title with an optimistic message. if this is based on truth, i'm sorry you're going through a tough time but it sounds like you have the right attitude to help you get through to better times. i'm glad that peter guided me to your poems!
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poem glad you enjoyed it. part fact ,part fiction, part personal part observation. Kind regards Andy Lyle
Date: 1/23/2014 1:08:00 PM
a very delightful poem indeed..full hope and strength..i love your poem, Robert!!! ^__^
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Date: 1/23/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. It is nice to get some positive fed back on ones work. I was wondering if I would get any comments. My poem Storm has 150 views and a few comments which I find strange. Thank you once again Andy Lyle
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