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Maybe I'Ll Be

A dark Angel calls to me, call me God she cries Breaking the fourth wall, a musing dream seen Absolute zero is what I call, how far to fall In the future maybe I'll be, that God you do call Until then in this life, I'll be one in a sharp sea A minion amongst minions living a simple serenity . Written using the tracks to 'The Reasoning's' album 'Dark Angel'

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/10/2015 9:28:00 AM

Dino James, Very short verse but it's a very thoughtful one.. sharp sea is a nice metaphor.. a witty you pused the titles.. :)! warm hugs//olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 2:15:00 PM

Hey Oliz, thanks kindly, written using the track titles to 'The Reasoning's' album 'Dark Angel' - It's a good challenge creating a poem from such titles, very similar to your lovely poems using my poetry titles, love them I do, warm hugs of many back//your Dino xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 2:03:00 PM

Hello James, getting closer to a belief. I walk with God, James... At the end, I hope that's my calling.. Love this..PD

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 2:53:00 PM

Many thanks PD, always appreciate your visits, hugs//James :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2015 9:19:00 PM

Nice to see you back more often Jamie! Light & Love

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 2:44:00 PM

Hiya Debbie, thank you kindly, very much appreciated, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 6:46:00 PM

What a clever write incorporating the song titles - i must give them a listen now James:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 2:40:00 PM

Evening Jan, this is one of the loves I like. Making poems from the titles of tracks from various bands. To date I've done poems to 'Touchstone's, Foreigner, Heart & and now 'The Reasoning' hugs//James xx