Maybe

Maybe

Majority maintain, 
		majestic, maritime, myths…
Myriads of Mermen & Mermaids
		Miraculously, meandering, merrily.
Maximizing, and motivating the mounting, momentum… 
..moving, magically in MerSea’s, manumit, mysterious, measureless, march!
	   Mortals, marvelous…’maginations							               



								           SunshineWilliams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:47 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
Spagnola Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Funom, there is no compliment higher than yours. I am in awe of your amazing comments...I know I am not worthy..You and I seem to be like-minded, with curiosity driven lives, thus art...Thank you for your heartfelt (my heart sure felt!) words my friend...peace, Jill
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Jill! The alliteration is musical and mesmerizing.
Spagnola Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Thomas, to what key shall I sing it to:)?
Duggan Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Jill that is one different way to write, I quite enjoyed the read, how clever you are using "M", I don't think I could come up with all those wonderful words, hope you are well, take care..........Vera
Spagnola Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 4:10 PM
I deny all doubts :)....peace, jill
Trifiatis Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Mezmerised, majority, meets, manny, mysterious, mental phenomena! Haha! Another impressive alliteration writing, dear jill!
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 3:17 PM
LOL Demetrios! What an outstanding observation :), jill
Trifiatis Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Mezmerised, majority, meets, manny, mysterious, mental phenomena! Haha! Another impressive writing, dear jill!
Spagnola Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Devine, dit denotation, delphically, deserving a deosculate Demetrios!
Lindley Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Very creative, great flow and wonderfully conceived! A7
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thank you so very much for your generous comments :), jill
Sanyal Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Great one Jill. Do you happen to read Thom Donovan and Jeremy Prynne? You might find them interesting.
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so much, I took a peak at Prynne's work and yes I am intrigued...I appreciate you sharing your knowledge :), jill
Sanyal Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:42 AM
They are not in the soup. You may try http://whof.blogspot.in/ http://jacketmagazine.com/06/pryn-kins.html There are more of Prynne out there.
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:35 AM
I searched them but found nada, except their names...
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Thanks Sabyasachi...No I am not familiar, are they famous or on the soup?
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:17 AM
wonderful alliteration:-) hugs jan xx
Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Thank you and hugs right back to ya..:), jill
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