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May We Evolve

I'm a solder in this tough world, trying to deal with all of the problems in one hurl, yet patience is a virtue that doesn't come with todays culture and is over looked, one day I hope the hypocrisy of society will finally be over and be nothing more than a page in a history book, the power mongers will grow sober, and the middle class will only prosper, when the infringement of rights happens no longer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/16/2016 2:10:00 AM
Corey Candelaria. Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:57:00 AM
Corey, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/13/2013 6:03:00 AM
Clever and honest poem about humans biggest down-fall. We are supposed to be evolving as God works to perfect His Creation-- instead human greed and pride prevail.
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Date: 5/12/2013 10:30:00 PM
Welcome to this site. You are off to a good start with this first submission. I know you will like it here.
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