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May Showers

I went outside into the night
So silvery slight, I heard the sound
And found it was the fall of rain
That murmured quickly through the trees
And tapped excitement on the leaves

To watch the slope in casement light
I stood and felt the sweet delight
The mist of rain against my face
Insisted that I join the game

Then swiftly as it came, it left
And left me feeling heaven blesse
It scampered eastward with the breeze
No keepsakes left, but dripping trees
And lovely scents of grass and clover

The shower gone, in one swift flight
I watched the moon take back the night


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Jones Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Very nice win Carrie....congratulations... Donna....
A   Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Carrie, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
Reyes Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:35 PM
lovely poem. i have missed being here on poetry soup. good to read your writings again Carrie!
Oyewole Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Amusing write... Shalom~ A.O
Horne Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 3:00 PM
love this, Carrie, Congrats on your wins : )
Jerden Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:57 PM
Excellent as always Carrie! My inner spelling Nazi says you have a typo, BTW. Check out my limerick for you. Cheers, Roy
Guzzi Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Just a dream...I enjoyed the scamper! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Squyres Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Tap, tapping on the leaves....dripping trees a keepsake... Just love this poem.... !!
Manassian Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Loved this, Carrie. Beautiful images! I especially loved your last line! Amazing! Thanks for the visit! :)
Zerbst Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Very fine poem! Everything is described perfectly, making me feel as if I were there seeing this wonderful scene!
Nair Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 7:49 PM
I love the tapping excitement on the leaves, beautiful description, thnx for stopping by:: Jag
Carrillo Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Carrie; This is a beautiful poem. I love the April showers, but right now we are having hard rain, which we need right now. thanks for reading Mystic Rose. I just love that name. Good luck in contest..... Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Another winner Carrie. I was raised in North Dakota so your husband and I were close neighbors. I hope he likes it. Love, Joyce
Austin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 12:59 PM
The last line is priceless, Carrie. The whole poem is first class, but, as so seldom happens, one line is gigantic. Love, daver
Jones Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Oh Carrie..I can just see and hear this poem.....good luck.....
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