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May I Explain Your Name

May I Explain Your Name? Gillis your name rose up from gaped legs in a cold tiled room under a G.E. sun a badge of family honor and pride even though you would tell a different tale Gillis I know you hated it the very sound and spelling friends questioned and laughed others admired some just cut it off (Gil) or chose something new Lynese Gillis my shinning new apple landing in the teacher’s garden of expert instructional skill glowing brightly with your gifts taking on a new title instructor Gillis torture me not for a moment’s idea surging with endorphins from your birth it came to mind from ancestral whispers to my drugged-out head the ancestors, spoke from spirits looked down proudly on a little girl babe and said it. So there, I've explained your name. 10/19/17 Parenthood Contest Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 10/25/2017 8:16:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Janis - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 6:09:00 PM
I really enjoyed how you addressed this poetic challenge, Janis. "...the ancestors, spoke from spirits...looked down proudly on a little girl babe...and said it." A very special name, indeed. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/20/2017 4:37:00 PM
Great take on the contest, very different to other entries.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/20/2017 10:20:00 AM
A wonderful pen! Enjoyed :) My best to you for the contest Janis, and a very happy day blessing xomo!
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