May I

salute! drink...to life forever flows my fountain may I quench your thirst filled with lots of love swallow my magical pills may I heal your pain on your final day to comfort you...peacefully may I hold your hand Multiple Haikus Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jamie Pan 7-23-2019

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:57:00 AM

Wondrous and creative poem. Simply enjoyed reading this morning. :) -JWE

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2019 7:59:00 PM

Sweetness selflessly offered up via haiku - reading each one was uplifting and a joy to me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2019 8:01:00 AM

You have a beautifully giving heart that flows with humanity, dear Charlieku. Your inspiring haiku are a lovely testament to your poetic talent and your compassion, my charming friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2019 2:25:00 PM

- Of course, my friend :) - Lovely written, Charlie :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/23/2019 2:32:00 PM

Delighted! Thank you Anna-Lise :) Hugs ..Charlie