May Be Habit-Forming

A life of drugs; he laughs, he shrugs Found this world to be "non-addictive" Hopelessly dependent; oh, can I end it? Hurt so deeply, now I'm vindictive Construct the thickest, strongest shell Impenetrable fortress; unstoppable blockade Barb-wire, a moat- ten million guards! They come, they go; they glow, then fade...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2013 10:29:00 AM

A P., wow... what a flow... i kind of read this at a fast pace.. of course I stopped when needed... some protection you constructed.. enjoyed...Linda

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 11:27:00 AM

Thanks for popping in, Poet D. I appreciate your reads and reviews very much :)