Matthew

Matthew, Beautiful with his hazle, brown, green, eyes.

He has been a favorite of the ladies since my mom brought him home.

The darkness of the brown in his skin, but the light in to, is so raidient.

He can make one laugh, like no one else. 

He's ten, but man he can act like a little old man that has gone through life.

He try's to boss me, ha! that little reble.

Somtimes I feel like I'm a bad example For him.

I wonder if he loves me, I know he does, but I just wonder sometimes.

My baby brother  he will always be, and I will love, even when he hates me.

He will suceed, for sure.

Baby brother I love you.

Please love me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/7/2009 8:00:00 AM
Wow. This reminds me so much of my little brother Thomas. Sometimes I feel the same way with him. Wishing he'd so love more. My lil bro is a little devil lol. Bossy little brat but i love him to death. He's 7 =P real nice job em.
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Date: 4/25/2009 1:52:00 PM
You must be a wonderful big sister. Beautiful tribute. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/24/2009 10:19:00 AM
Very beautiful poem, meaningful and truthful.
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:39:00 AM
such a nice tribute~~rebel....Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2009 4:16:00 PM
I am sure he loves you but at the age of 10 boys don't show affection that well...I really like this it is very endearing
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:50:00 PM
wow this is great hahahaha i hope he loves you too thier has to be someone to love you other than me
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:02:00 AM
This is so endearing Emily! Your emotions are displayed so well... BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:26:00 AM
I have two brothers and I have felt that same way. Good job.
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:59:00 AM
Nice work Emily, your work improves everyday...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:11:00 PM
ladies man for sure. just make sure he knows that ladies have feelings and he'll be alright. john h loving iii
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:30:00 AM
your love for your brother is wonderfully expressed, Emily! and thanks for your kin comments! Jim
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:17:00 AM
i feel the same way about my little brother and he's 35! lol. beautiful poem, Emily
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:59:00 AM
Matthew sounds like a delight, even if he is a "little rebel." He's just 10, Emily, but surely he returns your love for him. You'll see it more clearly as he grows up. Really enjoyed reading this one! Love, Carolyn
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