Matsuyama Castle Grounds / Japan 2008

The castle perched high above the busy city
ringed by a deep moat.
Fisher birds posed atop nesting sheds,
bobbing for koi,
preening their flea bitten feathers;
dreaming of past majesty.

Across the bridge through the massive gates
humanity, lumbered 
passing layered levels of water gardens,
overlapping like the squares in a Mondrian painting,
forming asymmetrical rectangular patterns.
The basins of rimed granite block 
edged in white limestone gravel hedged in an
early Fall display of chrysanthemums.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/19/2009 3:57:00 AM
Hi Deborah... I have read all your poems / Japan 2008... you lucky girl you : ) Japan is a country I have wanted to go to for ages now.... Reading your work has been a real pleasure and given me an alternative take on this intriguing culture and its beautifully exquisite styles, forms and ways. Thank you, and wonderfully written by the way ! Expressive, uncluttered, really excellent work. Thank you for your comment on Ankh Amon- Ra... ah ! ancient Egypt ! : )
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Date: 1/18/2009 5:55:00 PM
I visited the site and it is wonderful. I can't wait to go to Asia and experience the beauty that you have displayed with these writes. Great work.
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