Mathew 5, Me 7 (yrs)

Morning chapel
padre preaching
all new to me
came here for a natter
see what’s there to see
every hell has its angels
he don’t know ‘bout angels
how they fight
thrills of a motor bike
chariots o’fire
if he say he do, s’not true,
he aint read the manual
don’t know what a spanner’s for
he just know we threw it in
an’ it don’t work

	I’d run out o’ booze
	drunk as a lord
	awake till morn
	got no comfort
	I ain’t weak
	disinherited me
	had nothin’ to give
	always empty
	it ain’t right
	raised hungry an’ thirsty
	plenty o’ scrapes
	showed no mercy
	weak for a tart
	love n’ leave
	that ain’t odd
	yeah, was picked on
	fight for me rights

they be-me-attitudes
an’ I’ll not change
bless ‘em they try
‘n they try
I’ll never change

if heaven is gained
through suffrin’
I’m in

man-ah never found
streets paved with bread
much less with gold
I looked for trouble
‘n found it
there ain’t no justice
tain’t no miracle
that’s why I’m here
tain’t no miracle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:35 PM
Be-me-attitudes was great word play
Borg Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:48 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:34 PM
Well I hope these aren't your true feelings but I sure enjoyed this poem and your use of colloquial language. Great writing, Pascal. Are you a big motorcycle fan? My husband owned several Harleys throughout our lives. Hated giving up the pretty baby blue 💙 one. (Blue heart just popped up on my phone). It was that economic crisis of 2008 and we didn't get nearly it's value when we were forced to sell it
Borg Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:47 AM
If anyone understood this I knew it would be you. I entered this for Brian Strand's '1499 September Part 2' Contest. Let's see what his "attitude-be". Thank you for your comments, Andrea.
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