Master Painter

"I am sending you a gift of poetry, dear heart."  This one really reached out to me in its simple
  and uncluttered use of a sunrise to show God's handiwork.  I thought that since your work was
  in Haiku,  I would try to do a free verse version relating the thought of God painting His 
  morning canvas.  I hope you are okay with this.




  Inspired by the poem: "Heavenly Sunrise" by Constance~A Rambling Poet~

  For: "I Am Sending You A Gift Of Poetry, Dear Heart" Contest



         Free Verse Poem Written by: Dan Cwiak


   The Master takes his brush to palette~
       Effortlessly is the day's canvas dotted with color.

  
    Golden Horizon swished from the brush~
        Darkened only by the earth tones of morning.


     An Orange Ball creeps o'er the distance~
        Shades of red and yellow stir the burnt umber awake.


     Fine lines drawn for this morning~
         No mistaking the Hand of God at work!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/4/2016 12:49:00 AM
Just read this in the early morning, great representation Daniel.'
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:31:00 PM
This really is a wonderful poem! You really seemed to paint beauty through your words, here Dan :) I really enjoyed each line and of how you made it alive-- super congrats on your win & thank you as well for all your inspiring comments :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dan in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart". It is an honor to be on the list with you. Thank you for your kind comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:15:00 PM
wow, DAniel this goes to favs. One of the best I have read in this contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Daniel!! Enjoyed this very much! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:44:00 PM
Beautiful. . Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Daniel
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:42:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your HM in Constance's contest with thhis terrific write.. from her original inspirational poem.. enjoy your special honor my friend with luv tonight ...
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:49:00 AM
Excellent ... may the contest bring you more recognition for this write, my friend
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:29:00 AM
Hi Daniel, best of luck for Constance's contest!...Gert
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Daniel. Hope you have a wonderful day. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:28:00 AM
Daniel, you chose a great poem from Constance's collection and painted beautiful images with your words. Best wishes for success in her contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:04:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest~~
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