Premiere Contest WinnerMasquerade - Sensual Contest

Pretending can be a bold form of experimentation
and inventiveness. In pretending joy or happiness,
we may discover or enhance our capacity for it.

Harriet Lerner

Lord Leofric:  The waging of war is man’s affair
Lady Godiva: Then wage war in your way, M’Lord,
                       and I’ll wage war in mine

Movie, Lady Godiva of Coventry  (1955)


MASQUERADE

Quivers the man traversing the icescape.
Queen dominates the saddle with her eyes.
Size five, bare, narrow feet melt snowy floor.
Masquerade - his wife dreamy in disguise.
Flesh, smooth as ice rink, after zamboni.
Warm hearth behind the seven veils of d’sire.
Godiva tresses descend to her knees.
Bright red lips, parting flames, a flute of fire.
Singes where cherry makes contact...shivers
and moans like Winter Nor’easter through trees.
Memories malleable — tongue to ink.
Lobe, neck, thighs surrender to cold night tease.
Quiet warmth underneath the satin sheets.
His eyes wide open - concedes his defeat.

2/1/2021
Sensual Poetry
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

HMS Line 1 lists icescape as 3 syllables but it is 2
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Dutta Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 11:18 PM
GREAT. Big congrats to win TOP. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:08 PM
So glad i've got to read this gem, saw it won the sensual contest. Kim. Came straight away,,Just got to be a favourite..Love it..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:27 PM
oh yes, I remember this. I called it too. Winner winner, chicken dinner!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 3:15 PM
LOL! Thank you, sweetie!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderful poem. Enjoy the first prize. Take care Rama
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Rama!
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 8:30 AM
sensual seductive its just sensational Kim, i struggle wot write romantic poems let a lone sensual. many congrats on a very well deserved trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Hugs!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day with your win......................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much, Paula!
Sambourne Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Layers or erotic tension and meaning throughout this profound poem. Loved it! Congratulations. A stellar submission. All the best, Brian
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Aul Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Congrats, Kim -- this is a great poem. Great visions within........... George
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, George!
Mitra Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Wow....Nicely done...Congrats on your top win Kim...hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, Carol!
Puddifoot Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:08 AM
kim, this is what i dream of finding when i sponsor a contest! it's an extraordinary poem, very well written and original..i'd be proud to write a poem like this, and you should be too! i've always thought you're a very talented writer, and this poem is evidence of that - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Charlotte, that means so very much to me! Thank you!
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Wow! The sensuality leaps off the page. Excellent entry. Love it .Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Cecilia!
Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Such picturesque descriptiveness! Looks like a winner in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:15 AM
This is breathtaking poetry. I love it! God bless you with a win... love and prayers, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Thank you so much! God bless you!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:15 AM
You put my heart on fire. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:46 AM
That is such a compliment! Thank you, dear poet!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 7:38 PM
I am too young to read this one. It bristles with seduction, totally sassy! Amazing Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 7:54 PM
LOL! Thank you, Caren!
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:26 PM
ooh la la. I bet this will be a winner!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Thank you! I trust your eye! <3
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