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Mary Jane

There once was a lovable loser A smoker and hard-drinking boozer Devil said, Try Mary Jane She'll surely ease all your pain Loser vowed ~ never to abuse her

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:34:00 PM
I started to read this poem because I had a friend all through high school named. Mary Jane, with five brothers! Your poem would be great framed in a high school hallway. Certainly a "loser" if you do abuse her.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 7:21:00 PM
Actually, some of my earlier work is still framed in high schools around the Chicago area --- all those which have not remodeled their bathrooms in 50+ years. lol. :) gw
Date: 6/20/2021 11:43:00 AM
Where there is smoke there is fire her?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 7:19:00 PM
Clever as ever, Rico! Very good. :) gw
Date: 6/20/2021 9:03:00 AM
Interesting twist, Gershon. Losers never win, or so I am told!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 6:09:00 PM
This loser's vow is worth--- less! ~ gw
Date: 6/20/2021 1:06:00 AM
The slippery slope to doom Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 6:07:00 PM
Those damp hemp stem pieces sure are slippery. lol. Right down the drain. :) gw
Date: 6/19/2021 11:57:00 PM
True love can tolerate all pains!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 6:05:00 PM
As long as it's true love...

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