Martian With the Flu

There once was a Martian had the flu
He tried to talk, but out came Achoo!  
   He went to the Doc
   Who knocked on his block
After that he screamed Nanu, Nanu!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Ouch..."Nanu..." Good one, I can see that little martian with the doctor cracking him in the head with his reflex hammer.
Bangalee Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:51 AM
nicely penned
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Thank you for your generous assessment, Mahtab! Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 11:17 PM
Fun... kids of all ages would love your limericks, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 10:44 AM
I think kids over 55 may just like them the most. LOL. Thanks for the comment and the encouragement, Line! Best always, gw
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