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Marshmallow World

chaos and war unfurled ~ we don't really live in a marshmallow world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/15/2023 3:54:00 AM
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A wonderful Monoku, Lin. Sadly, an accurate depiction of our current state. Have a glorious day, my friend.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/14/2023 3:08:00 PM
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agree...the world is not a gooey marshmallow! Sad and scary that it can't be. Nice monoku, have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2023 5:35:00 PM
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It really is. Thanks a lot, Sara.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/14/2023 8:13:00 AM
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Sad but so true Lin, it's an evil world we live in. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2023 8:31:00 AM
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That's a sad fact I cannot deny, Tom.

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