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Marshmallow Joy

White balls of deliciousness--- Loved bite after bite. A smores delightful center would not be the same. My sugar-filled joy formed as a puff.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/23/2009 2:46:00 PM

pure white sugar poisonous stuff! LOL at 5 I ate 6 small boxes of campfire marshmellows..each box hel 8 marshmellows..that's 48 marshmellows, I threw up marshmellows for hours ;) Light & Love

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/13/2009 12:21:00 PM

Oh yes! You have nailed this one right on the head. I had a few on the hot chocolate last night, instead of coffee. It was so goooooood! Great job! ~Joseph

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/3/2009 12:06:00 PM

This made me smile. Nicely done

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/19/2009 11:38:00 AM

Yum! Smores are wone of my favorite campfire treats. Nice writing. Thank you for your comment on my poetry. God Bless you and have a wonderful day. Love, Dane

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/13/2009 1:42:00 PM

This is so sweet, in more ways than one! Cleverly constructed, with perfect word choices... Well done Brandee! Best wishes, Keith (PS thank you for your kind words, and for reading both parts!)

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/8/2009 2:27:00 PM

the real thing toasted over a fire. oooooow. jhl

Brian Strand

Date: 4/5/2009 12:37:00 AM

Thanks for your welcome blog comment today Brandee.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2009 12:49:00 AM

OhHHHHHHHHH! i love them too - toasted over a campfire. Lainie

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/18/2009 9:16:00 AM

I have hot chocolate, want to share? You did not write it, you made it. Good!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 6:18:00 PM

Yummy Marshmallows. This is a great poem but it makes me want to eat! LOL Smiles from Lolita~ btw thank you for your wonderful comment on my work! Have a great day!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 3/15/2009 1:39:00 PM

This is excellent. I can see the marshmallows. I like them with hot chocolate. This was my favorite during scouting around the campfire. Great job! ~Joseph

Brian Strand

Date: 3/13/2009 12:36:00 AM

Well captured Brandee.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog observations

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/11/2009 9:03:00 PM

This sounds wonderful, Brandee! I love those yummy puffs myself. Great job with this form! Than you for you kind words! Love, Robin

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/11/2009 8:52:00 PM

Marshmallows are one of my fav's, great epulaeryu...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2009 10:45:00 AM

This is a fun one....Smore's ....my favorite thing around a campfire!!! Ummmm!! ~ Carrie