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Marshmallow Joy

White balls of deliciousness---
Loved bite after bite.
A smores delightful center
would not be the same.
My sugar-filled joy
formed as a
puff.

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Debbie Guzzi

July 23, 2009 at 2:46 PM

pure white sugar poisonous stuff! LOL at 5 I ate 6 small boxes of campfire marshmellows..each box hel 8 marshmellows..that's 48 marshmellows, I threw up marshmellows for hours ;) Light & Love

Joseph Spence Sr

May 13, 2009 at 12:21 PM

Oh yes! You have nailed this one right on the head. I had a few on the hot chocolate last night, instead of coffee. It was so goooooood! Great job! ~Joseph

Corinne Curcio

May 3, 2009 at 12:06 PM

This made me smile. Nicely done

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 19, 2009 at 11:38 AM

Yum! Smores are wone of my favorite campfire treats. Nice writing. Thank you for your comment on my poetry. God Bless you and have a wonderful day. Love, Dane

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 13, 2009 at 1:42 PM

This is so sweet, in more ways than one! Cleverly constructed, with perfect word choices... Well done Brandee! Best wishes, Keith (PS thank you for your kind words, and for reading both parts!)

John Loving Iii

April 8, 2009 at 2:27 PM

the real thing toasted over a fire. oooooow. jhl

Brian Strand

April 5, 2009 at 12:37 AM

Thanks for your welcome blog comment today Brandee.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

April 2, 2009 at 12:49 AM

OhHHHHHHHHH! i love them too - toasted over a campfire. Lainie

L'Nass Shango

March 18, 2009 at 9:16 AM

I have hot chocolate, want to share? You did not write it, you made it. Good!

Lena Townsend

March 16, 2009 at 6:18 PM

Yummy Marshmallows. This is a great poem but it makes me want to eat! LOL Smiles from Lolita~ btw thank you for your wonderful comment on my work! Have a great day!

Joseph Spence Sr

March 15, 2009 at 1:39 PM

This is excellent. I can see the marshmallows. I like them with hot chocolate. This was my favorite during scouting around the campfire. Great job! ~Joseph