Marriage And Responsibility

You carry an innocent soul
As you wearing that white gown
He still have a lot of repentance
But why are you still confused
He's carrying this manly responsibility
His heart is going crazy right now
As he ask you to wear that wedding ring
Both parties turn into God and legal
As this luck hit two blessing in one time
A son in the belly and him in your heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Hello Hugo, I think on the wedding day the couple are nervous. So I am thinking they think doubt. Not all couples. i think they are nervous. Much love here. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Hello Hugo, once their wedding is over yes the responsibility begins. Cheers to the happy couple. They are devotedc to each other now. Much love here. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 1:31 AM
Yeah, nervous but excited. Two birds in one stone. Marriage and responsibility is a serious family matter. Whatever the unity process, love and devotion goes hand in hand. These are two qualities marriage last. Nice observation, Darlene. Love you more./Hugo.
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