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weathered and beaten the tides have cast me back to shore forsaken and destitute betrayal hurting far less than the emptiness now felt inside AP: 1st place 2023 Posted on November 13, 2022

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I Am Anaya

Date: 11/15/2022 7:55:00 AM

Even in emptiness there is meaning. Your free verses are beautiful, Line Gauthier. I used to collect the driftwood in Whidbey Island, shapely, coiled like a snake they were. I added turquoise eyes. They were my nic nacs!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/15/2022 1:15:00 PM

They are beautiful indeed ~ I totally understand your fascination.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2022 3:51:00 AM

Sad to be like a piece of driftwood inside. Emotive and expressive short work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2022 5:28:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara ~

Valsa George

Date: 11/14/2022 2:13:00 AM

The emptiness one feels inside is far more bitter than any betrayal. A great verse with a telling image ... Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2022 5:27:00 AM

Thanks, Valsa ~ have a lovely day