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HELP !

There was a young man from Rangoon
Who built a rocket and flew to the moon
But His rocket booster failed
Now i'm stuck here he wailed
He wont be coming home anytime soon.






Written 10th April 2018
For limerick contest sponsored by Viv Wigley.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 12:39:00 PM
Maybe he's found the 'other man in the moon.' LOL! ~ gw
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Date: 5/7/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, who knows what lurks on the dark side lol. Tom
Date: 4/13/2018 12:17:00 AM
This one made me laugh out loud. Good one, Tom. Elaine
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Date: 4/13/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, glad you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 4/12/2018 3:47:00 PM
Poor fellow! He should have taken a broom with him. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/12/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Paul, Yes he could have used it to fly home lol Tom
Date: 4/11/2018 7:02:00 PM
I guess he'll be the new permanent man in the moon, lol! Like you said at least he won't starve! Good one Tom! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 4/11/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Cheryl. I'm not so keen on moon cheese got a bit of a lunar taste to it lol. Tom
Date: 4/11/2018 4:44:00 PM
Ah, Tom, that fella from Rangoon is doomed to be marooned on the moon. Love it and best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 4/11/2018 4:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Caroline. I hope he likes cheese lol. Tom.
Date: 4/11/2018 1:35:00 PM
Tom, I love great limericks and this is a great one! Many thx for your kind comments re Clyde's Demise and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
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Date: 4/11/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words Robert. Regards. Tom.
Date: 4/11/2018 11:29:00 AM
Love this enjoyable Limerick, Tom . Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/11/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thanks very much Eve. Tom
Date: 4/11/2018 11:25:00 AM
Good one!
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Date: 4/11/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Tom
Date: 4/11/2018 10:44:00 AM
Did you say he was stuck in Wales? Name that tune. Rhinoceros from Rangoon. Your time is definitely different from America's.
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Date: 4/11/2018 11:59:00 AM
Well some parts of Wales are like the moon lol, we're five hours ahead here James.
Date: 4/11/2018 7:06:00 AM
Oh gosh he'll miss those curries on the moon,that he used to have in Rangoon. Lol, I'm gonna hit that Fave button for the unique content and the laughs, good luck in the contest Tom ...Maria :)
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Date: 4/11/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thanks very much Maria, pleased you enjoyed it. A moon dust curry cannot be very appetising lol. Tom.
Date: 4/11/2018 6:35:00 AM
Lol! Tom, I busted out laughing with this one. The imagery alone was hilarious. Poor, poor fella. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/11/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks very much Alexis, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 4/10/2018 11:11:00 PM
You are right. Not any time soon. Fun. Good luck in the contest Tom.
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thanks very much Caren.Probably be an empty suit before help arrives lol. Tom.
Date: 4/10/2018 5:50:00 PM
Nicely done, Tom!
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Tom
Date: 4/10/2018 5:31:00 PM
Hi Tom , love this so funny :) good luck in contest my friend ::))~~Niall
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Niall. Tom.
Date: 4/10/2018 4:41:00 PM
well done, tom! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:20:00 PM
Thank you very much ilene Tom
Date: 4/10/2018 12:41:00 PM
Should have been wiser dear, Tom! Hilarious my friend! Thank you!
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Date: 4/10/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, check, check and double check, especially if you're going to the moon haha. Tom
Date: 4/10/2018 11:46:00 AM
Oh no!! Poor soul
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Date: 4/10/2018 12:08:00 PM
Don't worry Tim, the moons made of cheese so he won't starve lol.
Date: 4/10/2018 11:28:00 AM
Lol probably should have just vacationed here on Earth! Excellent Tom ;)
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Date: 4/10/2018 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, Yes, I can think of prettier landscapes, but I suppose he had a great view of the earth. Tom
Date: 4/10/2018 10:46:00 AM
Very witty Tom, Makes me glad I'm staying on earth for now!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/10/2018 10:56:00 AM
Haha, thanks Jan, nearly happened on Apollo 13, they were lucky to get home. Tom
Date: 4/10/2018 10:30:00 AM
Sad and funny... but definitely cute, Tom.
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Date: 4/10/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks very much Line. Tom