Marking My Footprints

While listening to my footsteps rap I stumble: tiny boughs whip these cheeks until my eyes catch a glimpse of our old cabin tilting ahead, like a barren woman in quiet dignity. The field's gopher darts through an exit with such eerie silence, jolting my city bones. Alarmed, I peer into this space of time that has forgotten me--- the drying weeds, rough cobblestone, tattered panes... and how the wind whistles through this ancient dwelling's cracks asking me to leave, depart, get out. Maybe, the seasons and moons from yesteryears do not remember the prints marked by teenhood games. Pacing my riddled strides, I become aware I am not needed here--- not for a long while. Fate's Footfalls Contest for John Lawless 3/13/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, nette. Delightful.
May Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Congrats on your win Nette..
Lawless Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Nette, this had me sitting in my chair...just sitting there....reflecting. We can "look" back but we can't "go" back. Thank you for participating in this contest.
Neumann Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 3:27 AM
Wonderful images...
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Amazing imagery nette, wonderful poetry.
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:02 AM
One reason I never go back to the house I grew up in. Nothing there for me. I took the memories with me. Well written as usual, nette. Good luck!
Sands Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:33 PM
An interesting and mysterious poem. Well written Nette :)
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:11 PM
A deep poem and fitting for the contest..
Krampe Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Love the imagery, Nette.
Michael Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Interesting...retracing past steps long forgotten...with no reason to be there...Nice imagery and message too...All the best Nette
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Such beautiful imagery with the right amount of mystery. Hugs Rick
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Enjoyed reaching your place of memories..lovely description..surprise ending..well written, nette.
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