Markie's Advice

His future was assured. I’ll tell you why.
His father owned “Repairs and Parts Supply”.
Though only twelve, already Markie could
your median income at a glance descry
and whistle as he raised your engine’s hood.

With me, he mastered nothing. Didn’t try.
What need had he for Treaties of Versailles?
Before he came to school he’d greet the crew
he knew he would inherit, by and by,
and sell a solenoid – or maybe two.

My classroom, in those days, happened to lie
across the schoolyard. Out of habit, I
arrived before the others. There I’d sit
completely unobserved by prying eye,
and grade some papers, daydream how to quit.

Young Markie would approach me on the sly,
just me and him, alone at Fleetwood High: 
his head appeared around my door to shout
(it never varied – what a funny guy)
“Just sort your life out, sir!” and then run out.

Some jokes are full-on funny, some are wry:
and humour sometimes makes us want to cry:
our choices, often hard to justify.
My friends all wish, and say so with a sigh,		
I’d followed Markie’s counsel. So do I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Dear Michael, I enjoyed the wry humor of your verse. I was especially struck by "There I’d sit/completely unobserved by prying eye,/and grade some papers, daydream how to quit." A similar feeling I can recall with an old job too lol! A clever and wonderfully expressed poem. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishers.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:45 AM
I'm hugely grateful to you, Susan, for such a deft and apposite comment. Thank you! Michael
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Michael, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 2 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. I love the irony and unexpected end result. Good choice for your subject’s name too! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 3 has already started.
Coy Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Mark. I'm having fun. What a great idea! Michael
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