Marital Rubaiyats

(1) Two lumps of sugar kissed. Locked horns of marriage hissed. Churns lake of better-worse. Ring wins for friendship missed. (2) Ruddy red the roses. Darling, Please let’s cease our trifling quarreling. Rows and rows, of apologies, Bride and groom are gentle guarding.

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Date: 7/18/2024 11:10:00 PM
An interesting different style. I enjoy the scenarios.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 7/18/2024 6:33:00 AM
Awesome set of rubaiyats, the first one about a newly wedded life and the second one about a mature couple:) lovely, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna! xx
Date: 7/17/2024 11:16:00 PM
Very nice, Kim. "Bride and groom are gentle guarding." -- what the heck...life is oh too short. Better to make love and not war. Blessings my friend. Amazing write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 6:34:00 AM
Two imperfect people come together. Sometimes their will be quarreling but love’s roses will spread as they come together. ((hugs))
Date: 7/17/2024 8:27:00 PM
A sweet poem, Kim. Well composed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn xx
Date: 7/17/2024 2:04:00 PM
This is so beautiful- what an unique perspective, lovely rhyming, peaceable tone, beautiful...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! A marriage takes work.
Date: 7/17/2024 1:27:00 PM
I really liked that second versee so sweet, Kim. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 2:14:00 PM
Thank you! xx
Date: 7/17/2024 12:06:00 PM
Love the melodic wit!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 7/17/2024 10:58:00 AM
Poignant marriage poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 11:49:00 AM
Thank you, David!
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