Marital Bliss

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Husband and wife lived gladly for twenty-one years ~ till the day they met Date: 06/22/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/23/2019 6:46:00 PM

Hello William Kekaula, A beautiful romantic love poem you have created. Have a nice evening my friend. Aloha! Darlene.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2019 10:06:00 AM

I see a little humor in this one. It is a good poem because it leaves me with questions.. Was the 21 years their single life or did they live together as husband and wife then one day they realize actually who this person was that they had married? Thanks for soup mail. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/22/2019 10:46:00 AM

'Tis to be the former choice of the two Sara, for it bears a bit of an impact, and you are most welcomed ~ William