Marina Beach

marina beach--- waves go back without touching your name © kash poet ===================== Placement:3rd;(April 2012) Contest:Any theme,any form (maxm. 12 lines) Sponsor:Brian Strand By:kash poet

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:20:00 AM

wow, beautiful. SKAT

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/19/2012 8:26:00 PM

It has a timer on the program that allows me to set specific temperatures for certain scenarios/times of day...At 8pm it goes to 65 degrees while my family is asleep...we certainly don't need to heat the home while they are all bundled in their blankies. Energy efficient and cost efficient! Inquiring electrical engineers want to know! ha ha. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/13/2012 1:46:00 PM

relaxing sweet image in this haiku, Kash....u are very strong at placing your juxto at the beginning...:) Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/11/2012 12:06:00 AM

delicate write with much meaning, kashi buddy.. you have time to visit??.. glad you are okay, yes!... congrats on your recent wins... will try to personalize when time allows.. huggs!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/10/2012 10:16:00 PM

So tender Kash...such a lovely thought....nicely done...big huggsss,love deb (feel better soon*happy thoughts*)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/10/2012 2:10:00 PM

I'm happy to read one of your haiku today. This is a beauty. I picture a name written on the sand. This is one of the best I have read in a while...sorry to hear you are having health troubles. I hope you are feeling better soon. Sending healing prayers, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2012 1:54:00 PM

hi, Kash, you have a knack for catching me always when I am leaving. It must be very late there?? I have a lady I tutor and I need to drive over to her place now! Joe will be back from a super long trip probably in an hour or two so you may not see me here for a while. Hopefully i can do this from school tomorrow. SEe ya! andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2012 1:44:00 PM

If this means the name was written in the sand, wow, that's very nicely done, it's a bit symbolic sounding to me. I hope that's ok for how you are learning about haiku writing. I really like this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2012 9:20:00 AM

great scenario Kash.. always a wonder to read your imaginative flows.. oh so very sorry to hear of health issues luv.. will place u on prayer line in Rome today.. hoping u feel better luv.. I understand about the contest if u cannot enter.. take care of U luv..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2012 7:41:00 AM

:) - good one Kash.... - oxox Anne-Lise