Marina Beach

marina beach---
waves go back
without touching your name



© kash poet
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Placement:3rd;(April 2012)

Contest:Any theme,any form (maxm. 12 lines)

Sponsor:Brian Strand

By:kash poet

romancehaiku

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Skat A

December 3, 2015 at 1:20 AM

wow, beautiful. SKAT

Gwendolen Song

April 19, 2012 at 8:26 PM

It has a timer on the program that allows me to set specific temperatures for certain scenarios/times of day...At 8pm it goes to 65 degrees while my family is asleep...we certainly don't need to heat the home while they are all bundled in their blankies. Energy efficient and cost efficient! Inquiring electrical engineers want to know! ha ha. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 12:51 PM

Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

April 13, 2012 at 1:46 PM

relaxing sweet image in this haiku, Kash....u are very strong at placing your juxto at the beginning...:) Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

April 11, 2012 at 12:06 AM

delicate write with much meaning, kashi buddy.. you have time to visit??.. glad you are okay, yes!... congrats on your recent wins... will try to personalize when time allows.. huggs!

Deborah Burch

April 10, 2012 at 10:16 PM

So tender Kash...such a lovely thought....nicely done...big huggsss,love deb (feel better soon*happy thoughts*)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

April 10, 2012 at 2:10 PM

I'm happy to read one of your haiku today. This is a beauty. I picture a name written on the sand. This is one of the best I have read in a while...sorry to hear you are having health troubles. I hope you are feeling better soon. Sending healing prayers, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2012 at 1:54 PM

hi, Kash, you have a knack for catching me always when I am leaving. It must be very late there?? I have a lady I tutor and I need to drive over to her place now! Joe will be back from a super long trip probably in an hour or two so you may not see me here for a while. Hopefully i can do this from school tomorrow. SEe ya! andrea

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2012 at 1:44 PM

If this means the name was written in the sand, wow, that's very nicely done, it's a bit symbolic sounding to me. I hope that's ok for how you are learning about haiku writing. I really like this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 10, 2012 at 9:20 AM

great scenario Kash.. always a wonder to read your imaginative flows.. oh so very sorry to hear of health issues luv.. will place u on prayer line in Rome today.. hoping u feel better luv.. I understand about the contest if u cannot enter.. take care of U luv..