Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

Marijuana

~Marijuana~

I fly
High and high
To the reverberation
To the bliss

I fly
High and high
To the goddess
To the serenity
To make love with the unsung hymns

I fly
High and high
With the puff
Pondering Self, the elf
Calming down
When the whiff gulps down 
The pain
The body weight

I fly
High and high
To the void
Knowing I am not this
I am not that
Searching the Self, THE I
I fly
High and high

-Puvi-
(8/6/2015)

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Keith O.J. Hunt March 12, 2018 at 11:59 PM Break out your reef! Break out your chalice! We're gonna smoke a big bong man in Buckingham Palace! --- cool poem;-) Punnia Viswan Bhatia March 13, 2018 at 1:09 AM Thanks for the comment Keith..stay happy ..

Richard Evans November 1, 2017 at 12:33 PM This poem oozes metonymy. Very nice. Thanks for sharing..............peace! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 1, 2017 at 1:15 PM Thanks for the kind words Richard..god bless..love and peace.

Jannie Breedt December 11, 2016 at 6:11 PM Hi Punnia, so this writing was induced by meditation and not medication by smoking the stuff. Interesting, i suspected it because you have a beautiful soul. I would like to try your type of meditation if it makes your pen fly like that. Well done. Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 16, 2016 at 12:59 AM hahahahahaha...thanks for the sincere comment Jannie :) the meditation type is called jyothir meditation

Brian Mcclain February 12, 2016 at 11:48 AM Awesome transporting words. I got high just reading it. Punnia Viswan Bhatia February 12, 2016 at 12:04 PM Thank you brian for your valuable comment and time..will read you soon..take care..

Funom Makama January 25, 2016 at 1:04 PM My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share. Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 25, 2016 at 10:43 PM WOW WOW WOW..I am so uplifted with your wonderful comments Funom :)) Glad that you liked the poem...Thank you..God bless :))

Daniel Turner January 13, 2016 at 11:53 AM Being born about the time of your grandfather, I thoroughly enjoyed the 60's and 70's. It does however need to come with a warning on the bag. It isn't the same for any two people. Great write. Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 14, 2016 at 1:47 AM Thank you sir..god bless.. Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 14, 2016 at 1:46 AM Thank you sir..god bless..

Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2015 at 6:43 PM excellent pen certainly beautifully painted Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 28, 2015 at 8:27 PM thank you liam :)) wishing you a very happy and prosperous new year in advance :))

Rob Carmack December 18, 2015 at 10:40 AM Many a friend I used to know loved it so, and they searched self, right after searching the pantry as I skipped the herb, preferred shroom tea. Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 18, 2015 at 8:41 PM lovely read rob :) thank you for stopping by...take care

Jeannie Cronin December 17, 2015 at 9:31 PM Interesting poem, I guess I've never been on this level of consciousness which makes it a bit difficult to understand. Like a foreign language, sounds really beautiful but you have no idea what is being said so you can't relate. Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 18, 2015 at 12:32 AM Hahaha..a foreign language,indeed..bt i bet its beautiful and blissful when you go through it jeannie..shal i get you the meditation proces, which takes me to this state of mind?! Its called jyothir meditation.. :)) thank you for the comment..highly appreciated...hugs..

Eric Boddie December 13, 2015 at 9:40 AM I blaze the haze that leaves me amazed....I tote the smoke that makes me choke....I breathe the leaves inspire what I believe....I Love mary, I do mean very, she will be in my obituary....burn something....lol....I do enjoy this so very much....;) Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 13, 2015 at 9:51 AM Hahahahaha...and thats amazing...thank you so very much for the lovely comment and your time eric.. Love and peace