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Marijuana

~Marijuana~ I fly High and high To the reverberation To the bliss I fly High and high To the goddess To the serenity To make love with the unsung hymns I fly High and high With the puff Pondering Self, the elf Calming down When the whiff gulps down The pain The body weight I fly High and high To the void Knowing I am not this I am not that Searching the Self, THE I I fly High and high -Puvi- (8/6/2015)

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Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/12/2018 11:59:00 PM

Break out your reef! Break out your chalice! We're gonna smoke a big bong man in Buckingham Palace! --- cool poem;-)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 3/13/2018 1:09:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Keith..stay happy ..

Ricky Muse

Date: 11/1/2017 12:33:00 PM

This poem oozes metonymy. Very nice. Thanks for sharing..............peace!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/1/2017 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words Richard..god bless..love and peace.

Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/11/2016 6:11:00 PM

Hi Punnia, so this writing was induced by meditation and not medication by smoking the stuff. Interesting, i suspected it because you have a beautiful soul. I would like to try your type of meditation if it makes your pen fly like that. Well done.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/16/2016 12:59:00 AM

hahahahahaha...thanks for the sincere comment Jannie :) the meditation type is called jyothir meditation

Brian Mcclain

Date: 2/12/2016 11:48:00 AM

Awesome transporting words. I got high just reading it.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/12/2016 12:04:00 PM

Thank you brian for your valuable comment and time..will read you soon..take care..

Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 1:04:00 PM

My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/25/2016 10:43:00 PM

WOW WOW WOW..I am so uplifted with your wonderful comments Funom :)) Glad that you liked the poem...Thank you..God bless :))

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/13/2016 11:53:00 AM

Being born about the time of your grandfather, I thoroughly enjoyed the 60's and 70's. It does however need to come with a warning on the bag. It isn't the same for any two people. Great write.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/14/2016 1:47:00 AM

Thank you sir..god bless..

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/14/2016 1:46:00 AM

Thank you sir..god bless..

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2015 6:43:00 PM

excellent pen certainly beautifully painted

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:27:00 PM

thank you liam :)) wishing you a very happy and prosperous new year in advance :))

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/18/2015 10:40:00 AM

Many a friend I used to know loved it so, and they searched self, right after searching the pantry as I skipped the herb, preferred shroom tea.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/18/2015 8:41:00 PM

lovely read rob :) thank you for stopping by...take care

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 12/17/2015 9:31:00 PM

Interesting poem, I guess I've never been on this level of consciousness which makes it a bit difficult to understand. Like a foreign language, sounds really beautiful but you have no idea what is being said so you can't relate.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/18/2015 12:32:00 AM

Hahaha..a foreign language,indeed..bt i bet its beautiful and blissful when you go through it jeannie..shal i get you the meditation proces, which takes me to this state of mind?! Its called jyothir meditation.. :)) thank you for the comment..highly appreciated...hugs..

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/13/2015 9:40:00 AM

I blaze the haze that leaves me amazed....I tote the smoke that makes me choke....I breathe the leaves inspire what I believe....I Love mary, I do mean very, she will be in my obituary....burn something....lol....I do enjoy this so very much....;)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/13/2015 9:51:00 AM

Hahahahaha...and thats amazing...thank you so very much for the lovely comment and your time eric.. Love and peace