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Silent One's 'When Words Speak for the Silence of Art Contest ~ July 9, 2026

Mariana in the South

Mariana in the South
Oil Painting by John William Waterhouse

Mariana is a melancholic contemplation
painted after she was spurned for another.
Fetching in a silk gown except for the frown
she wears on the clear perfection of her face.
Portrayed with a look of grief and gloom, 
the artist wisely chose to embrace.

Into a mirror she stares with daunting eyes,
barely able to take a brief look
for she is haunted by her own reflection
where there is the conception of tears.
Pain dwells on her fragile features
as she prays for the return of her love
but her happiness has been felled
as if cut down by the blade of Bunyon's axe.

Waterhouse detailed longing and soulful sadness
captured in each brush stroke of oil on canvas
Unrequited love finds her in front of a looking glass,
forsaken and abandoned by her fiancé.
With arched, furrowed brows, and long brown tresses, 
Mariana stands alone and forlorn.

If she were able to speak, perchance she would say,
"Love is bitterly cruel and should be scorned 
for I have been forgotten, left to weep and mourn."

If she were to write verses while in deep despair,
these words she may have tearfully scribed 
with the trembling hand of Mariana, the fair.

I will have no one to hold me in dark of night
and never will my faith be restored in love
I am too heartbroken to face morning light
My heart bleeds like a pensive mourning dove

I cannot face the harsh wind when it blows
There is no hope left within my woeful soul
I will be alone, freezing in frigid Winter snows
for my heart is the part of me that love stole


*J. W. Waterhouse painted 'Mariana in the South' in 1897, inspired by
the poem of the same name, written by Alfred Lord Tennyson in 1891.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 3:13 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your great "Mariana in the South" write again. Enjoy your day writing away with your wonderful win, Paula.............
One Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:48 PM
You described Mariana vividly... Painting your own words.... the last stanza concludes the poem perfectly... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Jones Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations Lin on your win!
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Wow Lin you only write masterpieces . So much depth in your painting with words " into the mirror she stares with daunting eyes" " haunted by her own reflection " " soulful sadness " feel depth of hurt " forsaken and abandoned " let down in love like that of a Shakespeare tragedy .my heart sure did bleed for Mariana hugssss my friend xxx<3<3
Beaufort Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 11:18 AM
Hi Lin, the pain you describe hurts and makes me feel sorrow for Mariana. We hope she will recover and experience happier times! Those of us who experience happiness in life are truly lucky. We're smiling!!!
Lane Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Thank you for your patience with my delay in responding, Duke. Many thanks and smiles in return.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 4:46 PM
This painting has found it's voice with your well presented words.
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Alison.
Parker Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 3:39 PM
a deep sadness and foreboding in your poem, you have given this painting life with your poetry...good luck in the contest, dear poet
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, dear Frederic. Mariana's plight was an emotional jolt that I felt needed to be written. Thanks for appreciating my lines and your well wishes.
Rodgers Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 1:59 PM
Dear Lin, I have been very busy with all my grandchildren and just found out my youngest daughter is pregnant and due in Feb. :)) Just finished reading your poem, and honestly, it’s still bouncing in my mind. You’ve captured that heaviness of Waterhouse’s Mariana so perfectly, that sense of a soul suspended in time, caught between the memory of what was and the cold reality of being left behind. It’s such a thoughtful, melancholy piece, Lin. It makes me want to pull a chair up to her mirror just to offer a little company. You really breathed new life into her sadness. I'm curious, what drew you to this particular painting? Was there something about her expression that felt like it needed to be spoken? Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Hi Daniel and congratulations on yet another grandchild. Your offspring are springing new life into your family. How wonderful! Thank you for your gracious review and interpreting my vision of this Waterhouse painting. I share your feelings of wanting to bring her comfort, no matter how small. To answer your question... I saw a Waterhouse painting, 'The Soul of a Rose,' on one of Ink's poems and was enamored. When S1 offered his art contest, I searched more of his paintings and when I saw Mariana I knew I needed to give her a voice in her moment of dire distress.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 12:49 PM
What a great write for this great picture. Love Both. First time seeing this painting. What A Great Ending You Have Here. "Good Luck" I did, "When Words Speak For The Silence Of Art Poetry." Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away, Paula................
Lane Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 1:43 PM
I love the richness of bold colors from that age of great artists. Thank you, Paula.
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 10:19 AM
Love your interpretation of the painting Lin, just when I think you've written your best you go up a notch. I see a girl staring into a mirror but you get into the heart and soul of it. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 10:49 AM
Thank you very much for your supportive compliments, Tom. There are always notches we should aspire to reach ;-)
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