Marguerite

Tall red and pink-tipped spears reach for the nothing-at-all blue sky, all washed out with sunshine. The tight wrapped buds of the hollyhocks are too high for us to reach, but Imogen can. You and I wait for her to bring them down. Here behind the flowers, no one can see us. It’s hot. Your mother calls us in to dinner but beckons us first inside, past the bright kitchen doorway on into the dark dining room. We form a small circle behind her as she points to the thermometer on the wall-  112 degrees it says! I stay there trying to see if it will spurt out the top like it does in Popeye, but it won't do it and I've gotta go eat. Well then, goodbye!

Us kids didn’t notice the heat. Every day is warm in summer and we were busy in our shady corner. The best thing was the hollyhocks themselves. One of you, maybe you, maybe Imogen, showed me a big red blossom with a dark pink bud threaded at an angle onto its stem. A fairy tale princess! She was beautiful. I was aghast. Picking flowers! I looked around to see where your mother was. But you went right on, picking more flowers, more buds. I finally picked some, too, being careful not to take too many and to stagger the harvest so the gaps wouldn’t show.

We admired one another’s flower ladies and when there were three or four for each of us, we had a party and the princesses swirled around in their reddish dresses, riding away to adventures and back again, adjusting headdresses, perhaps even exchanging heads for the occasion. We talked quietly but incessantly among ourselves, making conversation for our  charges, inventing plots and actions. There was a stillness and an ongoingness about it like a French film, you know, the ones that have a single cello note played continuously. So began the letter to my dear cousin, Marguerite. She had been recounting stories about our ideal upbringing! As I recalled the scenes of childhood, I was not so sure.
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Rose  Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 6:03 AM
lol perceptions change from child to child, I really enjoyed your story, hope there is more :) congrats
Mccann Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:01 PM
I'm glad the story resonated with you! I have put a few episodes in the short story section, starting with "Marguerite" and then "excerpt 2" and so on. What I wanted was for readers to be reconnected to their own childhood memories. Thanks so much for the comment. Elizabeth
Caliri Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 10:52 PM
Congrats on getting 3rd place in my contest!!! Sorry it took so long to judge..a hiccup in the space-time continuum.
Mccann Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 12:46 AM
Thank you very much, Matt! I'm fairly new here so it's great to get validation. I hope your space-time has recovered. Elizabeth
Buehler Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 10:24 AM
This narrative is very enjoyable, with such vivid descriptions that the reader is charmed by the scenes from childhood. Good luck in the contest. :)
Mccann Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Evelyn! I'm sorry, I must have missed your comment earlier. I really appreciate your interest! Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Your three paragraphs remind me of 'To Kill a Mockingbird, and how hot it was in the Deep South on those 'Front-Porch' nights. thanks, Liz
Mccann Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 12:59 AM
I haven't heard "front-porch nights for quite a while! The scene is actually Ohio, prone to a little heat wave now and then. Other episodes on short story page. Nice to hear from you. RUOK?
Daniels Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:09 AM
We recreate our memories, don’t we ? So strange how some only recall the good ones & some only the bad ones...as saying goes “ it’s all in the mind “ liked imagery of the flowers & buds ??
Mccann Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Yes, the flowers were fun! And Marguerite was my very best friend. She's gone now (See Marguerite's Last Tango) but those were the happy days! Elizabeth
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 2:05 AM
Is this for the contest Chapter One. No matter, your narrative is first class.
Mccann Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 2:31 AM
I'm so glad you liked it, Victor! Really value your opinion. Yes, I've put it into the Chapter One contest so we'll see. Elizabeth
Volumes Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 8:56 PM
An enjoyable read Elizabeth. Thank you.
Mccann Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 2:34 AM
Oh, Wendy, thanks for that. I find it hard to evaluate my own work so appreciate the feedback very much! Elizabeth
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