Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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Marching Band

*Inspired by the photo

The light of hope swirls in the sky
As clouds form pictures to the eye
As if no distance is too far
It is all around, where we are
Quiet peace of a golden meadow
Where inspiration finds its flow
To rise with the sun above all
Burdens carried that now may fall
Off our shoulders with creation
Sharing with others elation
From sky to the land, hand in hand
United like a marching band
The music in our soul to be heard
Is cast like the sun with every word

Heidi Sands

1/30/18

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Frederic Parker February 1, 2018 at 1:47 PM Like the lilies in the fields dear poet, like the lilies in the fields Heidi Sands February 1, 2018 at 1:52 PM Thank you Frederic :)

Cheryl Hoffman February 1, 2018 at 8:35 AM Your wonderful poem depicts just how being out in Gods creation can be a totally uplifting experience; an uplifting write and picture Heidi!~Che :) Heidi Sands February 1, 2018 at 9:08 AM Thank you Cheryl . I appreciate your kind comment :)

Barry Stebbings February 1, 2018 at 3:31 AM Nicely written, Heidi. A bright, open sky certainly evokes hope and lifts the soul. // Barry Heidi Sands February 1, 2018 at 4:47 AM Thank you Barry. I appreciate your comment :) Have a nice day :)

Silent One January 31, 2018 at 1:08 PM Great poem Heidi.. Heidi Sands January 31, 2018 at 6:57 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Bette Bavington January 31, 2018 at 11:21 AM This gives some one a new way to look at things. Hello Heidi. I hope all is well with you. Heidi Sands January 31, 2018 at 12:20 PM Hi Bette. Thank you for your comment. Have a nice day:)

Mike Gentile January 31, 2018 at 7:43 AM So very uplifting, Heidi. I especially Like "as clouds form pictures to the eye" as one can actually see the message of hope Happy Wednesday XXOO Heidi Sands January 31, 2018 at 8:26 AM Thank you for the positive feedback Mike. Hope you are well. Happy Wednesday :)

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2018 at 6:26 PM Excellent depiction Heidi..a lovely write..as beautiful as the photo. Heidi Sands January 30, 2018 at 6:30 PM Thank you Vijay. I am happy to see your kind comment :)

Arturo Michael January 30, 2018 at 6:13 PM Truly a poem of hope...Lovely imagery Heidi...All the best my friend Heidi Sands January 30, 2018 at 6:13 PM Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May January 30, 2018 at 6:04 PM Beautiful thoughts inspired by this image...Very nicely penned Heidi.. Heidi Sands January 30, 2018 at 6:05 PM Thank you Joseph :)