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*Inspired by the photo The light of hope swirls in the sky As clouds form pictures to the eye As if no distance is too far It is all around, where we are Quiet peace of a golden meadow Where inspiration finds its flow To rise with the sun above all Burdens carried that now may fall Off our shoulders with creation Sharing with others elation From sky to the land, hand in hand United like a marching band The music in our soul to be heard Is cast like the sun with every word Heidi Sands 1/30/18

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Date: 2/1/2018 1:47:00 PM
Like the lilies in the fields dear poet, like the lilies in the fields
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Frederic :)
Date: 2/1/2018 8:35:00 AM
Your wonderful poem depicts just how being out in Gods creation can be a totally uplifting experience; an uplifting write and picture Heidi!~Che :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl . I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 2/1/2018 3:31:00 AM
Nicely written, Heidi. A bright, open sky certainly evokes hope and lifts the soul. // Barry
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2018 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Barry. I appreciate your comment :) Have a nice day :)
Date: 1/31/2018 1:08:00 PM
Great poem Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Silent One :)
Date: 1/31/2018 11:21:00 AM
This gives some one a new way to look at things. Hello Heidi. I hope all is well with you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2018 12:20:00 PM
Hi Bette. Thank you for your comment. Have a nice day:)
Date: 1/31/2018 7:43:00 AM
So very uplifting, Heidi. I especially Like "as clouds form pictures to the eye" as one can actually see the message of hope Happy Wednesday XXOO
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thank you for the positive feedback Mike. Hope you are well. Happy Wednesday :)
Date: 1/30/2018 6:26:00 PM
Excellent depiction Heidi..a lovely write..as beautiful as the photo.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy to see your kind comment :)
Date: 1/30/2018 6:13:00 PM
Truly a poem of hope...Lovely imagery Heidi...All the best my friend
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 1/30/2018 6:04:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts inspired by this image...Very nicely penned Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2018 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)

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