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morning egg yolk surprise brightly peeks over the horizon it casts electric lavender up high under coated with magenta sounds a watchman crow's warnings as doves quietly coo the chill hangs heavily increasing the desire for cover pollen floats coats makes air an enemy seconds then minutes silently pass thanksgiving and praise softly spoken

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Howard Kerr

Date: 4/27/2025 1:40:00 AM

Enchanting work which unfolds in stepwise pattern. Super word choice accents morning detail in vivid hues Howard

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 4/1/2025 3:57:00 AM

Dear Sara, you've painted a delightful morning's image. Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/1/2025 5:28:00 AM

Thank you, Mulu, for the congratulations and the wishes for a blessed day. I always need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/29/2025 7:21:00 AM

You've created a bright morning with this form and your engaging words Sara. Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/29/2025 7:46:00 AM

Why, thank you, Linda. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Sara K

Gary Radice

Date: 3/29/2025 12:33:00 AM

Beautifully structured Sara. I can almost feel that chill that hangs heavily. (My favourite lines here) Your description of the big sky makes for a great read. Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/29/2025 3:44:00 AM

Gary, cool mornings and warm afternoons. Such a contrast now but I like it so much better than the heat and humidity of summer. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 3/28/2025 11:14:00 PM

Beautiful poem with ingenious alignment ! It was a pleasure reading about your March morning and learning that your heart brims with gratitude.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/29/2025 3:43:00 AM

Valsa, delighted that you like the alignment. Yes, I have noticed that you write about nature and gratitude as well. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/28/2025 5:39:00 PM

enjoyed your creativity, and the subtlety of various images, just a wonder, thanks poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/29/2025 3:41:00 AM

Yann, your thoughtful review is uplifting. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 3/28/2025 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful arrangement of words and choice of words for this flawless write! How descriptive! Well presented! Love the picture too dear sara! Pleasure reading.:Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/28/2025 9:40:00 AM

I am glad that you found it flawless. Delighted it was a pleasure to read. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2025 7:20:00 AM

- A wonderful morning, Sara :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/28/2025 9:26:00 AM

Yes, it was a nice morning out on the porch for a few minutes, Anne-Lise. Too cold and too much pollen to stay long. Sara K