Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

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march morning

morning

       egg yolk surprise
              
             brightly peeks
       
                  over the horizon

                          it casts electric

                                  lavender up high

                                           under coated 
            
                                                     with magenta

sounds

   a watchman crow's

             warnings

                      as doves quietly coo


the chill

       hangs heavily

              increasing the desire

                         for cover


pollen

    floats

         coats

             makes air 

                     an enemy


seconds

     then minutes

            silently pass

                    thanksgiving and praise

                                             softly spoken

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Howard Kerr April 27, 2025 at 1:40 AM Enchanting work which unfolds in stepwise pattern. Super word choice accents morning detail in vivid hues Howard

Mulu Magdalinos April 1, 2025 at 3:57 AM Dear Sara, you've painted a delightful morning's image. Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day. Sara Kendrick April 1, 2025 at 5:28 AM Thank you, Mulu, for the congratulations and the wishes for a blessed day. I always need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler March 29, 2025 at 7:21 AM You've created a bright morning with this form and your engaging words Sara. Congratulations! :) Sara Kendrick March 29, 2025 at 7:46 AM Why, thank you, Linda. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Sara K

Gary Radice March 29, 2025 at 12:33 AM Beautifully structured Sara. I can almost feel that chill that hangs heavily. (My favourite lines here) Your description of the big sky makes for a great read. Cheers - Gary Sara Kendrick March 29, 2025 at 3:44 AM Gary, cool mornings and warm afternoons. Such a contrast now but I like it so much better than the heat and humidity of summer. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Valsa George March 28, 2025 at 11:14 PM Beautiful poem with ingenious alignment ! It was a pleasure reading about your March morning and learning that your heart brims with gratitude. Sara Kendrick March 29, 2025 at 3:43 AM Valsa, delighted that you like the alignment. Yes, I have noticed that you write about nature and gratitude as well. Sara K

Yann Rolland March 28, 2025 at 5:39 PM enjoyed your creativity, and the subtlety of various images, just a wonder, thanks poet Sara Kendrick March 29, 2025 at 3:41 AM Yann, your thoughtful review is uplifting. Sara K

Ink Empress March 28, 2025 at 8:28 AM Beautiful arrangement of words and choice of words for this flawless write! How descriptive! Well presented! Love the picture too dear sara! Pleasure reading.:Sending you light always Sara Kendrick March 28, 2025 at 9:40 AM I am glad that you found it flawless. Delighted it was a pleasure to read. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2025 at 7:20 AM - A wonderful morning, Sara :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Sara Kendrick March 28, 2025 at 9:26 AM Yes, it was a nice morning out on the porch for a few minutes, Anne-Lise. Too cold and too much pollen to stay long. Sara K