Marathon in Paris

Why do these girls run, why? tell me
Why are they running the marathon?
All deserve a gold medal, all of them
I have tears in my eyes when I see them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:45 PM
SO SWEET. I only ran because my gym teacher made me, or I had a bus to catch. haha
Buehler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 10:18 PM
It's wonderful to see people doing what they love, and striving to be their best at it. A fine poem, Yann. :)
Rolland Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:11 AM
thanks evelyn, i think they are extraordinary people
One Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 12:48 AM
It was a great race
Rolland Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:12 AM
so true, thanks poet(
George Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 8:54 AM
It is so graceful to see them running... ! But running a Marathon race is no easy a task for women athletes. As you feel, they all deserve a medal. Have a great weekend, dear Yaan.
Rolland Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:12 AM
thanks valsa, i loved your comment
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 1:40 AM
- Indeed they all deserve a gold medal :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:13 AM
so true dear poet, thanks for reading
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 8:33 PM
Aww, that is so sweet! You have a sweet heart, Yann! Trés bien, min amie!
Rolland Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 5:17 AM
thank you so much for the touching comment, i think they are mentally very strong, more than me, have a nice week end poet
Buhagiar Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 2:02 AM
I see nothing wrong in females running to compete in a marathon. That's equality.
Rolland Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 5:19 AM
thank you Victor, no criticism, i don't blame these women, i totally admire their strenght, thanks for commenting, enjoyed your stopping by
Anaya Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 10:48 AM
It is a calling for some women, to demonstrate their determination, tenacity, and equality, Yann. My take on it. Tears of joy I get when I see what we humans are capable of for eg. Olympics.
Rolland Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 5:21 AM
thanks anaya, your words are perfect, determination, tenacity, i totally admire these athletes
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