Marathon in Paris

Why do these girls run, why? tell me
Why are they running the marathon?
All deserve a gold medal, all of them
I have tears in my eyes when I see them.

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Date: 9/25/2024 12:45:00 PM
SO SWEET. I only ran because my gym teacher made me, or I had a bus to catch. haha
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Date: 9/22/2024 10:18:00 PM
It's wonderful to see people doing what they love, and striving to be their best at it. A fine poem, Yann. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/23/2024 5:11:00 AM
thanks evelyn, i think they are extraordinary people
Date: 8/27/2024 12:48:00 AM
It was a great race
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/23/2024 5:12:00 AM
so true, thanks poet(
Date: 8/21/2024 8:54:00 AM
It is so graceful to see them running... ! But running a Marathon race is no easy a task for women athletes. As you feel, they all deserve a medal. Have a great weekend, dear Yaan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/23/2024 5:12:00 AM
thanks valsa, i loved your comment
Date: 8/21/2024 1:40:00 AM
- Indeed they all deserve a gold medal :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/23/2024 5:13:00 AM
so true dear poet, thanks for reading
Date: 8/15/2024 8:33:00 PM
Aww, that is so sweet! You have a sweet heart, Yann! Trés bien, min amie!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2024 5:17:00 AM
thank you so much for the touching comment, i think they are mentally very strong, more than me, have a nice week end poet
Date: 8/13/2024 2:02:00 AM
I see nothing wrong in females running to compete in a marathon. That's equality.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2024 5:19:00 AM
thank you Victor, no criticism, i don't blame these women, i totally admire their strenght, thanks for commenting, enjoyed your stopping by
Date: 8/11/2024 10:48:00 AM
It is a calling for some women, to demonstrate their determination, tenacity, and equality, Yann. My take on it. Tears of joy I get when I see what we humans are capable of for eg. Olympics.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2024 5:21:00 AM
thanks anaya, your words are perfect, determination, tenacity, i totally admire these athletes
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