Mar Sin Leat

Braid thoughts of thee and smile Caelan
What waits beyond the burning Sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peranteau Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 10:47 PM
many times mine cant haz hern queue 'bout mine... az the sun'z cauze uv mine stroke < there'z no google evoking mine cant here dear poet ;) i admit, i wuz the curious soul with regard your title here.....if blessings be due you; may they be...much love, james
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Great Epigram, James. Long Good-byes. Many Blessing to you
Edmonds  Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:10 PM
An ingenious Epigram James… Belle
Goff Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:21 PM
Thanks Belle!
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:46 PM
ancient made new! I like this a lot, James.
Goff Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Thanks Andrea, I wanted a two-line epigram that let the reader's (and mine!) minds to soar! Love, loyalty, strength, hope & Peter Pan Possibilities!
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 6:59 AM
I had to look up Mar sin Leat. I found two or three possible meanings. LOL..I guess it means in this sense, bye or good-bye. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my blog. I appreciate the prayers. Sara
Goff Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Thanks Sara, God Bless Your Family
Kalita Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:50 PM
Such a reflective, marvellous epigram, truly brevity is the soul of wit who knows how to play with perfect words.. have a blessed days
Goff Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 8:07 PM
You're very kind Silpika, thank you
George Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 9:03 AM
Such a powerful epigram giving a sweet vision of the beyond, dear James !
Goff Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 10:00 AM
You're very kind Valsa, thank you so much!
Deo Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 7:30 PM
Amen. Jimbo - much love God hears and sees U and Ma. Shalom shalom and Amen
Goff Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 7:57 PM
Thanks my brother, Shalom
Delaney Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 6:45 PM
This is beautiful, Jlm……and thoughts braided with the perfect words. Glad your Mum is doing well. Best, SuZ
Goff Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Thanks SuZ!
Raven Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Outstanding work, James. I had never heard of this form and then I looked it up. This Epigram moves the mind and paints a strong vision. Have a wonderful Tuesday ..... Mike.
Goff Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Mike!
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Insightful Epigram, James. I'm following your poetry and will read more this week my friend. A poet friend in Texas (with DNA from Scotland) Bill
Goff Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Bill!
Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Two powerful lines that reveal the light of your beautiful heart my friend, :_)
Goff Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Greetings from Minnesota Vie! So sweet of you to stop by! Tomato season here (hot & humid, love it!) plants (12) are thriving furiously! Pole Beans are climbing to the stars! Herbs are peak of flavor ('specially choco-mint!) Ma's good but fragile, took her to market yest. loved it, gotta do it, but not easy, all my love to you & Aldo...jimmy james
Horsman Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 10:35 PM
An ancient language, a modern poem, and needed.
Goff Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Land of my ancestors from The Black Watch, a militia of select Scottish Clans...thanks for stoppin' by Harry!
Deo Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 6:58 AM
I have homework with this epigram. Thank you, Jesus. Jimbo, u know I had to come visit ...what with Baddaford Farmstall? I have great memories ... May take my wife before Mayvebds. Did u go yourself, or google-jourbeyed to FT. BEAUFORT? Shalom shalom Bro.
Situation Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 3:54 PM
Braid thoughts. I suppose if I really liked her.
Goff Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Exactly
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Fascinating. i have no idea where to find your lucid dream series but i wanted to see at least one of them.
Goff Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Sweet!
Maverick Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 11:52 PM
In Christ.. Way better then what we now know.'
Goff Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 4:06 AM
Amen Joe...
Lampkin Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 3:47 AM
I can only imagine. Thanks for creating a reflection of joy
Goff Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Thanks Rosalyn!
Kalita Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 6:16 PM
An outstanding epigram, apt... Silpika
Goff Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 7:42 PM
Grazí!
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