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Maples Crying

Many are the maples that encircle my home, my nest, my dwelling abode, And in the dark of night they tap on my frosty windows, crying; Past their deathly stance, a wintry scene, Looking through their tangled limbs snow is falling, endlessly. Everything in my world is icy white, sky and earth mingling, Soon, I whisper to them, you will be wearing your emerald gowns; Creaking and groaning they mumble in their frozen rest, Reaching out gnarled fingers to me. Yes, my dears, soon, so soon you will stand in resplendence, Ice and snow will be replaced with fringes of delicate, filigree green; Now rest, now sleep maples sweet, Gather your memories of spring, summer and fall close and dream. _____________________________ February 3, 2013 Poetry/Acrostic/Maples Crying Copyright Protected, ID 02-454-132-03 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Best Short Acrostic Poem Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 02/2013 Second Place

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Date: 1/16/2016 9:51:00 PM
once again, Anytime.... LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 7:07:00 PM
Broken, thank you for the nice reply
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
Date: 1/15/2016 10:15:00 PM
BROKEN, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Hans, thank you so much for the congratulations ~
Date: 1/10/2016 2:27:00 PM
Very very beautiful Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 3:46:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Date: 1/10/2016 2:18:00 PM
Many congrats on your acrostic win Broken Wings! From Jean
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Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 3:47:00 PM
Jean, thank you for the congrats ~
Date: 1/9/2016 8:28:00 PM
Constance, this is a masterpiece of lovely imagery! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 1:00:00 PM
Kim, oh I like that word masterpiece, thank you so much for the congrats ~
Date: 1/9/2016 5:39:00 PM
discovered this beautiful well written poem jus now, excellent write BW, congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/9/2016 5:41:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the beautiful and excellent and congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 1/9/2016 3:56:00 PM
I hadn't read this before. It's wonderful! I love the imagery and personification.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 3:59:00 PM
James, thanks for the wonderful, this is an oldie, I wrote right before getting very sick and having to spend months in hospital, I was full of poetic wonder although not well ~
Date: 1/9/2016 3:47:00 PM
Broken,, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 1/9/2016 4:46:00 AM
An excellent write! Congrats on your placement!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:01:00 PM
Balveen , thanks for the excellent and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 1/8/2016 11:21:00 PM
Broken, congratulations on your well deserved win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, PD, appreciate ~
Date: 1/8/2016 11:19:00 PM
This poem is so lovely in visualising your outstanding imagery Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful win! So glad I didn't miss reading this gem!
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:03:00 PM
Connie, so happy to highlight this poem written in 2012 just before a serious illness struck me that's all I could do at the time, pick up my pen and write, thank you for the congratulaltions ~
Date: 1/8/2016 9:26:00 PM
Congrats on your placement :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:04:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats, hey, where are my hugs and smiles !!!
Date: 1/8/2016 9:04:00 PM
gosh, I see that I saw this one back in 2013. WEll, it was sure a treat seeing it again. This has to be one of your best acrostic poems FOR CERTAIN. I love it. Except for a few tiny punctuation things, this poem was impeccable. Congrats on your second place win.
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:07:00 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for my wonderful placement in your contest, I am so honored. I think my punctuation has improved since 2012, and I am so happy to dust off this oldie and present it to the soup members....
Date: 3/11/2013 3:11:00 PM
enjoying this beauty again, my friend - hope you and the kitties are well and warm x
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Date: 2/17/2013 6:13:00 AM
Beautiful!!!To settle the ripples of my mind I come to read your poetry.
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Date: 2/16/2013 8:28:00 PM
I love your personification here. Your poetry always has a special tender quality which I am finding in this one!!
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:26:00 AM
enjoying this gem again, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x
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Date: 2/6/2013 1:32:00 PM
love this beautiful and clever write, my friend. Hope you are feeling much better and keeping warm with the kitties x
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:25:00 AM
you are a gem of a poet dear Constance, i've missed you so much your poetry always inspires,, and so does this... love to you and your wonderful poetric mind
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:44:00 AM
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:43:00 PM
delicate and beautiful, Constance....it makes me want to touch your poem ....
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Date: 2/3/2013 6:33:00 PM
constance,I just adore when you write this way. What a beautiful poem. One of my faves for the day!!
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Date: 2/3/2013 4:58:00 PM
I especially like the line that has the fringes of delicate, filigree green..That so describes the delicate greenery in spring..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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