Maples Crying


Many are the maples that encircle my home, my nest, my dwelling abode,
And in the dark of night they tap on my frosty windows, crying;
Past their deathly stance, a wintry scene, 
Looking through their tangled limbs snow is falling, endlessly.
Everything in my world is icy white, sky and earth mingling,
Soon, I whisper to them, you will be wearing your emerald gowns;

Creaking and groaning they mumble in their frozen rest,
Reaching out gnarled fingers to me.
Yes, my dears, soon, so soon you will stand in resplendence,
Ice and snow will be replaced with fringes of delicate, filigree green;
Now rest, now sleep maples sweet,
Gather your memories of spring, summer and fall close and dream.

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February 3, 2013


Poetry/Acrostic/Maples Crying
Copyright Protected, ID 02-454-132-03
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, Best Short Acrostic Poem
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 02/2013

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 9:51 PM
once again, Anytime.... LINDA
A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Broken, thank you for the nice reply
La France Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
A   Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:15 PM
BROKEN, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Thank you.
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on the win! :)
La France Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Hans, thank you so much for the congratulations ~
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Very very beautiful Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Many congrats on your acrostic win Broken Wings! From Jean
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Jean, thank you for the congrats ~
Merryman Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Constance, this is a masterpiece of lovely imagery! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Kim, oh I like that word masterpiece, thank you so much for the congrats ~
Sage Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:39 PM
discovered this beautiful well written poem jus now, excellent write BW, congratulations on your win
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Sage, thanks for the beautiful and excellent and congratulations, appreciate ~
Inman Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM
I hadn't read this before. It's wonderful! I love the imagery and personification.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:59 PM
James, thanks for the wonderful, this is an oldie, I wrote right before getting very sick and having to spend months in hospital, I was full of poetic wonder although not well ~
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Broken,, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Skat
Cheema Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:46 AM
An excellent write! Congrats on your placement!
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Balveen , thanks for the excellent and the congrats, appreciate ~
A   Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Broken, congratulations on your well deserved win. LINDA
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Thank you so much, PD, appreciate ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:19 PM
This poem is so lovely in visualising your outstanding imagery Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful win! So glad I didn't miss reading this gem!
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Connie, so happy to highlight this poem written in 2012 just before a serious illness struck me that's all I could do at the time, pick up my pen and write, thank you for the congratulaltions ~
Scars Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Congrats on your placement :)
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats, hey, where are my hugs and smiles !!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:04 PM
gosh, I see that I saw this one back in 2013. WEll, it was sure a treat seeing it again. This has to be one of your best acrostic poems FOR CERTAIN. I love it. Except for a few tiny punctuation things, this poem was impeccable. Congrats on your second place win.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for my wonderful placement in your contest, I am so honored. I think my punctuation has improved since 2012, and I am so happy to dust off this oldie and present it to the soup members....
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 3:11 PM
enjoying this beauty again, my friend - hope you and the kitties are well and warm x
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Beautiful!!!To settle the ripples of my mind I come to read your poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:28 PM
I love your personification here. Your poetry always has a special tender quality which I am finding in this one!!
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 8:26 AM
enjoying this gem again, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x
Horne Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 1:32 PM
love this beautiful and clever write, my friend. Hope you are feeling much better and keeping warm with the kitties x
Horsman Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 9:25 AM
you are a gem of a poet dear Constance, i've missed you so much your poetry always inspires,, and so does this... love to you and your wonderful poetric mind
Gigno Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:44 AM
!!!
Veetil Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 11:43 PM
delicate and beautiful, Constance....it makes me want to touch your poem ....
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:33 PM
constance,I just adore when you write this way. What a beautiful poem. One of my faves for the day!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:58 PM
I especially like the line that has the fringes of delicate, filigree green..That so describes the delicate greenery in spring..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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