Many Unhappy Returns

It’s a work day
And it’s my Birthday
All the fours
Male menopause
A Grade - A
Gray Day
Life’s not designed
To be kind
Never mind – eh!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 19, 2013 at 1:40 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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May 18, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Bummer! Not even a piece of cake? Enjoyed. daver
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April 24, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Nice poem.
A   Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM
about your poem: he he.... yes returns... never understand them... PD
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January 21, 2013 at 7:35 PM
David, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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January 13, 2013 at 7:09 AM
David a big welcome to the soup, I like this poem of yours...David
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