Many Moons Ago




The ancient prophecy foretold
so very long ago ...
has finally arrived
Coming swiftly on eagle wings
The howling wind carries piercing night cries,
as open iron claws fall
from the mountain sky
And the slumber days, shown many moons ago,
has awakened death — cursed faces
carved on the fallen totem poles
So many, many moons ago,
my careless people were told
by the Almighty Spirit 
not to pray to their vain wooden idols,
whom they worshiped in the forest groves
A flood of tears would one day wash upon the shores,
and bathe my people in the ashes
of their burnt fallen totem poles
Our unheeded shamans foretold
of a white pestilence cleansing of the land,
and our idol hearts would be broken
Visions of rivers of blood
from a snow-capped mountain would flow
As foretold ... so many moons ago
We should not have slaughtered the innocent
of our enemies, whom we last fought ...
giving them no mercy shown
Now our wooden sins have revisited us,
with the steady waves of pale crested sails, 
seen upon the new moon horizon shores
This changing color of the evergreen leaves
and red clay soil
was foreseen so many moons ago
And the fate of the ebony mane buffalo
is the spirit path we now weepingly follow
Yes, the fall of my prideful people was foretold,
so many moons ago
And I cover my bowed chieftain head
with the ashes of the toppled totem poles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/14/2017 8:39:00 AM
My grandfather was full blood Native American. I love this great poem my friend.... Top shelf writing. A fav.....
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Date: 10/12/2017 11:38:00 AM
Ty everyone for your insightful, kind and thoughtful comments. This poem is my kindred message to the First Nation people of this land. Because I know their pain of being cast down by God for idolatry. That is what happened to my Hebrew people. God warned us about our idol worshiping, and when we didn't listen, He cast us out of our land, and let another people possess our heritage. This poem means a lot to me. Love and more love always to everyone. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 10/11/2017 9:52:00 PM
What an amazing storytelling poem, great poem!!
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Date: 10/11/2017 7:38:00 PM
Wonderful ancient realistic storytelling Freddie!~Che :)
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Date: 10/11/2017 3:14:00 PM
Wow this made for very good reading indeed. So eloquent in my humble opinion
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:34:00 PM
Wow! Freddie, Where do I start? So many folk / nations were treated so unfairly over the years. You expressed that fact very well in this well written piece. Good title , content and imagery. Excellent job- Alexis
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