Many Hands

W illing O ccupation brings R egular K udos See more @ 1 Cor 3:14 & Mt 10:10

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2010 8:33:00 AM

Cute one,Brian. By the way, dieting is not my entry. I did not use the correct rhyme scheme by employing the word dieting, so I can hardly change my whole poem when dieting is the key word. So I am using the other beatle song I did instead. Thanks for your comment. Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2010 5:05:00 PM

Nice Acrostic which would help if we all believed and did. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2010 10:54:00 AM

Yes it does Brian... work is rewarding not matter what kind it is... elegant words... thankxxx for sharing... blessings.. with luv... Linda-Marie..

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 1/23/2010 1:23:00 AM

still building that first zigugrat. indeed we are.