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Mans Origins

Man’s Origins Searching for origins, from perhaps stars. (10) Conclusive evidence, apes? (7) Chaos, madness encumbers and it jars (10) Religions poke presumptions (7) Mythology, astrology, “too far!” (10) Confounded naysayers, truths (7) Leading absolutely nowhere, they mar (10) Yet, faith, belief, knowing truth (7) Journeying beyond, all seen, avatars (10) And knowing goes full circle (7) Our universe sings with divine sitars (10) ©2016 Bonnie Jennings. All Rights Reserved Learning exercise Syllabic and Free verse exercise. Syllable counts at ends Any suggestions are very much appreciated... Thanks!

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Date: 7/19/2016 11:08:00 AM
In all honesty, I didn't care for this exercise, but did it to learn.... So, having said the above, learned about the syllable counter... Thanks all!
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Francis Osho
Date: 7/20/2016 3:33:00 AM
bonnie. u r a natural an original. u dont need to count or learn to express honestly. just b a river n flow. dey will count it 4 u

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