Bonnie Jennings Poet Free verse

Mans Origins

Man’s Origins
Searching for origins, from perhaps stars. (10)
Conclusive evidence, apes? (7)
Chaos, madness encumbers and it jars (10)
Religions poke presumptions (7)
Mythology, astrology, “too far!” (10)
Confounded naysayers, truths (7)
Leading absolutely nowhere, they mar (10)
Yet, faith, belief, knowing truth (7)
Journeying beyond, all seen, avatars (10)
And knowing goes full circle (7)
Our universe sings with divine sitars (10)




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Learning exercise 
Syllabic and Free verse exercise.  Syllable counts at ends

Any suggestions are very much appreciated... Thanks!

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Bonnie Jennings July 19, 2016 at 11:08 AM In all honesty, I didn't care for this exercise, but did it to learn.... So, having said the above, learned about the syllable counter... Thanks all! Francis Osho July 20, 2016 at 3:33 AM bonnie. u r a natural an original. u dont need to count or learn to express honestly. just b a river n flow. dey will count it 4 u